Comments | mikiya2200: Off the rack

mikiya2200

Off the rack

Feb 15, 2011 21:30

Rating: PG-13
Characters: Dean, Sam, Alastair, Anna (kind of)

Pairing: gen / no pairing
Disclaimer: Don't own them, though I used the dialogue from the end of "Hell's Angels".
Word Count: ~ 1.000

Summary: Tag to "Hell's Angels".

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spn sam, fanfiction, episode tags, spn dean

Comments 2

ghostfour February 19 2011, 12:37:07 UTC

Duuude...

just, wow. So much emotion, and I could *feel* the words behind Dean's voice. Well done.

Fourhundredandeight months.
I did the maths when I couldn't sleep.
Was it yesterday?
I don't know, time's different.
The day before?

this was... just perfect dean voice.

"How I feel? This… inside me…
It just wasn't enough.
"I wish I couldn't feel anything, Sammy. I wish I couldn't feel
a

damn

thing…"I never put this together before, but this is ironic, considering how Sam ended up. and yes, I feel for Dean, but you think he'd remember that and have been a little more sympathetic to sam...who really couldn't feel a damned thing. See, this is the kind of call back to old eps I would *love* to see on the show. I would have loved ( ... )

mikiya2200 February 19 2011, 19:38:00 UTC

The funny thing is, I was *waiting* for something like this from Dean all the time in the sixth season after Sam came back, I didn't get why he would never say anything about it. If I was mean I'd say that they just don't care about character depths anymore and, considering how many stuff just gets swept under the rug this season... Well, it's not surprising that they don't remember it... or don't want to deal with it, whatever.

Thinking about this piece, now, I don't think I'd ever write sth. like that again, 1st because... well, you know me and Dean, not a good combination most of the time and 2nd... it makes Dean getting off the rack to save Sam once again not responsible for his own choice, you know? If Al really did that, if he really threatened to hurt Sam then, of course, Dean would have had no other choice but to get off and torture to keep Sam safe. It would once again be Sam's fault somehow and so I'm really glad it didn't play out like that on the show.

Was still fun to write though and I'm happy you liked it! *hugs*