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mikiya2200

If you could only see -- chapter 9/?

Feb 20, 2011 03:30

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spn if you could only see, fanfiction, spn john, spn unleashed, h/c, spn bobby, spn sam, supernatural, spn dean

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mimblexwimble February 20 2011, 05:08:29 UTC

Of course John wouldn't even realize why Sam was upset about the order. Oh John. You're such a dumbass, but you love your boys so I can't hate you.

mikiya2200 February 24 2011, 20:40:18 UTC

Well, in John's defence: He is suffering from a major concussion, he's absolutely not thinking straight at the moment, but you're right, he *is* a dumbass at times and Sam will make sure that John will finally understand what he was talking about, I promise! :)

4422shini February 24 2011, 01:26:43 UTC

Yaaaay! Update! :D

I love how disorientated John is. Few authors truly get a concussion down properly, and I'm so happy to read a story that is getting how f*cked up they make you.

Poor John. Poor Sammy too!! Well, always poor Sammy. <3

mikiya2200 February 24 2011, 20:43:53 UTC

To be honest, I didn't check about concussions before writing this, I simply went with how I thought people would react who were suffering from one. SO glad I got that down right! :D Though, it was really confusing how confused and not-thinking-straight he was at times.

And, yes, poor Sammy, I really have to do something to make him feel better. Will think about that... ;)

4422shini February 27 2011, 08:09:17 UTC

Hey, I see that not a lot of people are commenting on this. Have you thought about posting this fic to Ohsam or spn_hurtcomfort? You'd probably draw a huge crowd because this fic is awesome!

mikiya2200 February 27 2011, 11:31:32 UTC

Thank you for your suggestion, I haven't posted there yet, I've had this journal for so long now, but I'm still new to the communities-thing and there are so many for Supernatural that I haven't considered them so far. Will definitely give it a try!

dont_hate_me01 February 27 2011, 20:55:43 UTC

I'm up to date! What a pleasure this story of yours is! Totally in love with it! Can't wait for more.

mikiya2200 February 28 2011, 16:09:19 UTC

Thank you so much for all the lovely comments, I'm glad you like the story so far. Can't wait to find out what you think about the next chapter, I'm working on it! :)

kimberleyafc February 27 2011, 23:42:54 UTC

I found this on spn_hurtcomfort and I love it already. Love the characters and looking forward to more.

mikiya2200 February 28 2011, 16:10:46 UTC

Thank you so much, it's so good to hear that people like this story!

arren61 March 4 2011, 21:28:17 UTC

I just found this!!! and what a good surprise was that *beams*
your writing is amazing and your plot is so unique. can't wait for more:)

mikiya2200 March 5 2011, 17:02:51 UTC

*beams right back at you* Thank you SO much! I'm working on the next part, but it might take another week or three, I'm not really the fastest writer there is out there. But I'll do my best, I promise! Glad you're enjoying this. :)