Comments | mikiya2200: All of me

mikiya2200

All of me

Mar 24, 2011 17:44

You used to captivate me by your resonating light
Now I’m bound by the life you’ve left behind
Your face it haunts my once pleasant dreams
Your voice it chased away all the sanity in me

Evanescence, My Immortal

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Mary’s spirit… do you really think she saved the boys?

I do.

Missouri’s words echo in his head. Soft. Compassionate. Meant to ( Read more... )

spn seasons of my soul, drabbles & snippets, fanfiction, spn john, supernatural, episode tags

Comments 8

borgmama1of5 March 24 2011, 20:15:23 UTC

I never thought about this episode from John's POV and you've written quite the emotional journey--it feels like this could be canon, how John reacted.

Fabulous job!

mikiya2200 March 25 2011, 00:13:01 UTC

I never thought about it from his pov as well, I had never really realized he would have been so close to her and yet missed the last chance to see her. I'm happy she saved the boys, but I think John deserves some closure with her as well, too sad they never gave him the chance. What I did realize though is that both of them (Mary and John) are stubborn enough to protect their children even when they are gone, that's such a nice Winchester-trait.

Thank you so much, I'm happy you like it!

denyce March 25 2011, 01:08:02 UTC

So much ♥ poor John. I wrote a coda to Home a couple of years ago, funny we went in completely different directions, yet I love both and find each very plausible.

Yes it seems to be a Winchester/Campbell trait to save each other from, after, and beyond death ;)

Awesome job, thank you for sharing adding it to my favs =)

mikiya2200 March 25 2011, 17:32:26 UTC

Aww, thank you so much! I really think Home is one of those episodes that deserves a tons of codas, so much has happened in it. Can't stop wondering how the scene would have played out if John had been there with the boys (or even without the boys) when Mary appeared, it was already a tear-jerker, but with him there.... wow...

Thank you SO much, you've just made me VERY happy! :D

dragonlit March 26 2011, 01:08:01 UTC

Such strong emotions in this, sad (agonizingly sad actually - so it worked) but definitely satisfying. John really didn't get the closure and I loved the way he worked towards it through this. Terrific story. Definitely going in the favorites. I do have a love of angsty fics. :)

mikiya2200 March 26 2011, 22:25:45 UTC

Thank you so much! It was only after watching that episode again that I realized they never gave him closure and that's just so sad. Even though I really think that it would have killed him to see Mary as a ghost I believe he would have wanted to be there for/with her. Can't imagine what she would say to him, though, I think that would be really interesting...

Anyways, thank you! :)

nat_spn March 29 2011, 06:53:56 UTC

Thank you very much for sharing. It's a fantastic and just heart-wrenching coda from very unexpected POV.

mikiya2200 March 29 2011, 11:10:40 UTC

You know, I find it a little sad that in an episode about Mary John's pov is the unexpected pov, I think he deserved some closure, but I guess that's what fanfiction is for, right? ;)

Thank you very much!