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[mikiyu_chan]

Comments

[choko_kuriimu]

Awww, that was so cute~.

There are the usual grammar mistakes, starting and closing your speech with the "....", and whatnot.
May I suggest that you get yourself a beta? ^^

If you want, I could help you with it. Though, my English isn't really pro. xD

But other than that, it's cute.
Can't wait until the next one~. <3

[mikiyu_chan]

oh..well.... i don't have a beta, so.. if you accept, could you please help me? ^^'
i would be really grateful if you do it~

i'm happy you've liked it! ^-^'~ tough it has the grammar problems... ;-;' even in portuguese i have problems with the grammar part... XD
and i promisse i'll try hard to translate the other! ò_ó/

[choko_kuriimu]

Hahaha. Sure~, I'll help you, but I'm a very slow person. >>; And my English isn't very pro either. ><;

[mikiyu_chan]

will you help me even tough it is a lemon? ^-^'
if you don't like lemons is ok to say a cleary 'no'. XD
'cause then i ask for you help for the other Kanontakuya fic i have. XD

[leifang666]

you're english isn't that bad.

i was dissapointed

j/k

i like this fic it was cute.

[mikiyu_chan]

XD
oh dear... I'm so sorry for disapointing you, although I'm happy that it is not so bad.

thank you for the review, and I'm happy you liked it ^^

[xjust_a_foolx]

nawhhh that was really cute ^_^
well done

and your english really isn't that bad, just maybe need a beta to help with grammar ^_^

[mikiyu_chan]

oh..thank you for the comment~
i'm really happy you liked it ^-^~
oh, well.... yes. i need a beta. XD
but first i have to find a beta. u_u'''

[xjust_a_foolx]

If you want I could help I seem to have a lot of free time on my hands lately XD

[mikiyu_chan]

oh really? XD
so... when i finish the translation 'ill send it to you, ok?^^
thanks for that <3

[aphrodisiaclove]

The plot and such was adorable.
But, I think it would be better if you had a beta.
I know I'm not the best at english either,
but would you like me to help you?
I've got tons free time.
^___^

[mikiyu_chan]

yey <3
a beta~
*-*/

XD

thanks for the comment and when i finish to translate the others, i'll ask for you help then~
<3

[aphrodisiaclove]

Alright, good luck! ^___^
p.s-I'm adding you! <3

[mikiyu_chan]

well now i just have one problem... Are you Afraid of movies? 2 is a lemon... so I don't know if you are ok with it...^^'
sorry I didn't tell it earlier..;-;'