Standalone// Align A Line

Nov 30, 2007 03:43

Title: Align A Line
Disclaimer: Don't own.
Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn
Pairing/Character(s): Yamamoto main
Rating: PG
Summary: For the Lyric Wheel challenge. Song was "Letter -From the Lost Days-" from the Silent Hill OST. Yamamoto enters the future, encounters what he might become.

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fandom: katekyo hitman reborn, pairing: none

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mithas November 30 2007, 14:26:57 UTC
omgomg. a;lsdkfjasldkj at you! Trying to finish lyric wheel fic myself so excuse me if I do nothing but gibber nonsense at you. So uhm anyway, first things first, if the lyrics gave you trouble I'm so sorry! haha. But I had major love for the Silent Hill OSTs and this was kinda screaming for a Reborn fic. If you want you can listen to the song here.

So anyway. It raised his hackles; he'd always been slow to anger, but this, this was bad taste, a joke that would never be funny. CANNOT DESCRIBE MY LOVE ENOUGH. Why is this scene so heartbreaking. You know, while I recall Yamamoto's comment (because I headdesked) about the mafia game even after the time leap, I never really thought of what his thoughts/reactions during those first few hours/days would have been.

Somewhere along the way, nearly ten years worth of time, Yamamoto had learned the value of a blade that could murder. Uhm. Just yessss. ♥ So happy you picked Yamamoto for this piece.

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mikken November 30 2007, 20:37:56 UTC
O-ohman, this was yours? *g* What are the chances. BUT NO, I LOVED THIS SONG a-and totally went and got it too 'cause it just went PINGPINGPING TYL!YAMA SO HARD hahaha.

You know, while I recall Yamamoto's comment (because I headdesked) about the mafia game even after the time leap,
Hahaha yeaaaaah. I swear, it was like, Varia arc, Future arc, he must have figured it out, right? And then he goes and says that and I just buried my face in my palm oh Yamamoto.

But eeeee, I'm glad you liked it, yus~ ♥

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mithas December 4 2007, 08:02:20 UTC
Haha. Yeaa. I kind of went omgyey! when I saw you had the lyrics. <3 I AM GLAD YOU LIKED THE SONG. I swear I think the major reason I joined this challenge was so I could sic a song I like on a victim someone.

Yamamoto makes me facepalm all the time. Though I would love to see when he finally realizes. Or maybe just finally admits to himself that it's not a game. It's like, his denial is even worst than Gokudera's.

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mikken December 4 2007, 16:51:26 UTC
Same here, same here. xD; Though haaaaah, my song was kind of hard, and I think it pinged something REALLY DIFFERENT for the person that got it. (I still need to read that, hahaha, whoops. B-but. 8018. orz) Is it terrible I've already got songs lined up if there's another round? xD;

Yamamoto's denial is just. kind of special. *swt*

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gomimushi November 30 2007, 15:07:22 UTC
ohmygodwin. D:
Poor darling Yama.. sometimes though, it makes me wonder if he really does think it's a game, or whether he's ever had a nagging suspicion. Either way, this is a wonderful fic. :'O

"My 'future self' - the guy could still laugh, right?"
.... it seems.. just so like something Yama would say D:

* pats him *

ohgodsineedtofinishmylyricwheeltooD:

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mikken December 1 2007, 02:26:03 UTC
O-on the one hand, I wonder how anyone could be that cheerfully oblivious. On the other hand, well. orz Thank you for taking the time to read the fic though, yus. :D

O-oh man, good luck finishing! Or rather, don't kill yourself finishing? ^^;

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joey_fraser November 30 2007, 15:12:07 UTC
YOU. OMFG YOU FINISHED IT. YOU FINISHED IT YOU FINISHED IT UWAAAAAAA. ♥____♥ YAMAMOCCHAAAAAN. ♥♥♥♥♥ i-I like the way you write, this sounds so awesome and---AAAAAAH. *dies

MOAR. ♥

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mikken December 1 2007, 02:22:59 UTC
I DID. FINALLY. *rolls* xD; It ended up less depressing than I'd been expecting, b-but well. IT WAS YAMAMOTO except there were times when I started typing up parts of the Rain Guardian fic into it instead before realizing, hahaha. whoops. /o/ BUT I'M GLAD YOU LIKE THE FINISHED PRODUCT.

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sei_kou_ki November 30 2007, 16:40:38 UTC
"Hey," he said, cheerfully. "My 'future self' - the guy could still laugh, right?" That broke my heart. ;_;

I really, really like how you incorporated the lyrics with the story. Your portrayal of Yamamoto, like his personality and how he'd react to everything, was spot on in my opinion. So awesome~

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mikken December 1 2007, 02:19:06 UTC
Thank you very much! m(_ _)m

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eloardragoon November 30 2007, 17:04:54 UTC
God... That was beautiful o_o Your Yama was so Yama! And you pictured the lyrics perfectly. You did a great job, both with TYL!Yama and present-but-in-the-future!Yama

And I don't know what else to say, I'm just speechless o.o

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mikken December 1 2007, 02:17:04 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad it was IC for you, y-yes. And that you could tie it back to the lyrics; I was worrying a little that I'd started drifting from them, hahaha.

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