[clear mornings, commentary]
commentary forlalagirl208 's request:
title: clear mornings
series: naruto
pairing: naruhina
rating: K+
genre: angst
( --the sun, even if it reigns above the sky, it always hides under the earth every twilight-- )
title: clear mornings
series: naruto
pairing: naruhina
rating: K+
genre: angst
( --the sun, even if it reigns above the sky, it always hides under the earth every twilight-- )
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But both of them knew what he meant.
You are getting married.
Uwaaaa, I love these lines! XD
Errr, I didn't know if I did justice with the emotions here. But I know that Hinata would never, ever be bitter if this situation become a reality in canon. But still, I think about Sakura and Hinata's devotion as both consuming. For them, it became their strength to be better women and warriors. And wouldn't it be realistic to be frustrated if the love of your life is just too oblivious/disregardful of your feelings? Well, I imagine na.. if ever this happens sa canon, Hinata will probably turn her disappointment inwards... like.. blame herself or something... forever dwell on the wasted opportunities... Di ko alam, pero para sakin Hinata is unselfish.. pero Sakura is, XD kaya posible si Sakura maging bitter.. si Hinata unlikely ( ... )
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Hmmm, I was not really that familiar with Hinata's personality, due to the lack of mainstream Naruhina fics I read. (The last time I read one was Ate Mel's works.) But still, I'm relieved that the scenario can be capable of turning Hinata into a bitter woman. After all, they really had a chance to be together.
It's really Team Seven first. Even die-hard NaruHina fans cannot refute that argument. It breaks my heart too, but this is the truth. Naruto will give up anything for his team mates. And yeah, you explored that in Learning To Breathe too. Poor, poor Hinata.
Ehehe, thank you shei.
Yes, three chapters. clear mornings is its first chapter (Naruhina), scalding afternoons is its next chapter, revolving on Neji Ten. (Neji is actually going to marry Hinata) And last but not the least, long evenings the last and sasusaku chapter, where Sakura and Sasuke confront each other in a cell ( ... )
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INCEST INCEST!! Wahehehe!! XD Waiii, parang lahat sila mga romances na hindi natuloy! Kasalan lahat ni Sasuke, that jerk! wahaha!
Waiiiii!! Miko!! Sulatin moooooooooo~ huhuhu.. T____T
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LOL, yeah, incest. Wahah, and to think that the original title of this fic was Fidelity. Yeah, and there was a prologue too, before the NaruHina one, I can probably find it in the net somewhere for you?
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*sulks because I suck at reading other people's lovely stories as much as updating* =(
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You want to request for a commentary?
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I'm merely writing commentaries for my old fictions. It's just like writing author's notes in the middle of the fanfiction. XD
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