[patak, commencement commentaries]
commentaries as per request of velvet_strings
title: patak
series: naruto
pairing: sasusaku
rating: teen
language: Filipino
"Tumigil ka na sa ginagawa mo."
Ngunit hindi pa rin siya tumitigil. Patuloy pa rin ang kanyang pagtatampisaw sa ilog na may ngiti sa kanyang mukha. Ang damit na nanikit sa kanyang balat, ang malarosas niyang buhok na buhul-buhol. Halatang namumutla na siya sa lamig ng nakapanginginig na buhos ng ulan, ngunit patuloy pa rin siyang tumatakbo... tumatawa.
[Ganyan itsura ko pag naliligo sa ulan, parang baliw. WAhahahhahaha.]
"Para kang bata." Sambit nya, hindi umiinag sa kanyang kinaroroonan. Ang mga matang kasing dilim ng mga nangungulimlim na langit ay patuloy sinusundan ang bawat galaw ng dalaga. Ang pag-obserba nito sa bawat kupas nang kanyang kamay. Ang pakikinig nito sa malamyos niyang tawa.
Lahat...
Lahat nang tungkol sa nasabing babae ay nagpapakulo ng kanyang dugo.
Sa galit.
Sa pagkaasar.
Sa pagtitimpi.
Sa paghihintay.
Sa pagnanasa...
[Yesh, unreleased sexual tension si Sasuke. Biro mo, pinapanood nya lang maligo sa ulan! si Sakura. Di kaya't nakakapagtataka kung ano ang iniisip ni Sasuke? Baka mamaya hentai na yung nasa utak nyan. LOL. Naseseduce siya ni Sakura, wahahhaha~!]
"Bakit 'di ka sumabay sa akin?" Tanong niya.
Ang mga malakandilang niyang daliri na siyang tumulak sa basang buhok upang masulyapan siya nang mabuti.
[Malakandila, yesh. Trying hard to be makata yan~!]
"Wala naman tayong misyon."
Isa talaga siyang tanga.
[Lutong talaga ng tagalog.]
Hindi ba niya nakikita na hindi siya maaring tumawa nang malaya? Hindi ba niya alam na naninikip ang kanyang baga sa paghinga tuwing nakikita man lamang siyang ngumiti? Hindi a ba nalalaman na ang ulan ay nagpapaalala lamang nang masasakit na nakaraan nya?
"Ni minsan..." Dagdag pa nang babaeng ito. "...wala akong kasama maligo sa ilalaim ng ulan."
[Errrr, wahahhaahahah. Ewan ko, parang awkward siya no? Nagiimbita ba?]
Nawala ang kulay nang kanyang ngiti.
Naroon pa rin ang taas ng kurba nang kanyang labi, subalit wala ang init nito.
"So? Ano naman sa akin kung wala kang kasama?"
[Arte ni Sasuke, pa so-so pa siya. Taray~!]
Nauubos na talaga ang kanyang pasensya sa mga walang kasaysay-saysay na paguusap na ito.
"Alam mo ba ang ulan daw ay luha nang mga anghel?"
[Ay, churva ng drama~! Dyosko!]
Hindi na niya makita ang kanyang mukha.
Ngunit nakikita nya pa rin ang madudungis nyang paa na patuloy na sumisipa sa agos ng tubig. Ang mga kamay na patuloy humahawak sa dulo nang kanyang damit.
[Sabi sa iyo e, naninilip na si Sasuke dito.]
"Wala akong pinaniniwalaang ganyan."
Kung totoo ito, bakit hindi lumuha ang langit sa kanyang pagluluksa?
[Kasi emo ka, yun yun. Luluha pa sila e, sobra sa kalangitan yung senti mo dyan]
"Ngunit hindi sila lumuluhang magisa." Patuloy ang kanyang malumanay na tinig. "Pag nakikita nila ang tao ay naghihirap...Nasasaktan...Luluha sila ng tuluyan"
At tumigin siya sa kanya, ang berdeng emeraldes na nakakakita ng iyong salooban...
[emeraldes, ano yan? BATO?!]
Kumikislap sa kadiliman ng ulan...
"...Tuluyan silang luluha para sa iyo...Upang maibsan ang sakit"
[AY CHURVA, BADINGZER!]
At siya'y ngumiti na siyang nagbalik ng liwanag sa kanyang porselanang mukha.
"...Upang mapawi ang hinanakit ng isang hindi maaring lumuha."
[HOY MARUNONG LUMUHA YANG SI SASUKE, napakaemo.]
"Aalis na ako." Tinalikuran niya ang wala sa katinuan na babaeng ito. Sinabihan na nga tama na, salita pa rin nang salita.
[Madaldal yang babae mo, kasi magaling yan. Buti nga e. Kung di nagsasalita yan wala na akong fanfic.]
Bahala na siya kung magkasakit, di ko na kasalanan yun.
[Shuuus, Worried ka rin e.In denial prince ka nanaman.]
Pero di niya pa rin mapigilan...
"Umuwi ka na."
[Sa bahay ko Sakura. SMEX TAYO!]
"Sasuke..." Sambit niya.
[LOL, LETS GET IT ON~!]
"Kanina ka pa namumuro." Sumbat niya ng nakatalikod...
[Namumuro, wahahah, favorite word ko pag nabwibwiset na ko.]
"Ayaw ko ng ulan."
[Dahil lumalaganap ang hormones ko.]
At dahan-dahang tumutulo ang mainit na daloy ng tubig sa kanyang mukha...
[Sabi sa iyo eeeee, emo. Pero actually si Emo time ni Sakura to heheh]
And my first sasusaku tagalog drama became a crack fic. XD
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title: commencement
series: naruto
pairing: sasusaku
rating: K+
[Shortest sasusaku fiiic]
It was not enough to use an entire day to say goodbye, much less to say it in two minutes.
You were standing in the middle of the elegant front seats. There was the chaotic toss of dark, rope tied hats up in the air. The whole compound was filled with ear-splitting cheers and mechanical camera whirrs.
It was totally filled with shouts of laughter and cries of joy.
[This was the scene when I was on PICC, standing along with the rows of graduates after the ceremony. It was crazy, in a heartwrenching way.]
So you wonder why you can still hear her sobs even if she was standing a meter away from you.
[And then the unbidden image of Sasuke and Sakura there, in front of me, just materialized during my graduation. XD]
Her light auburn locks, which she curled painstakingly for hours earlier, were now matted against her drenched cheeks. Her hands were crumpling that hard-earned paper against her chest, soaking it with her tears.
You walked slowly towards her, as her delicate frame trembled, making the dark coat over her body slightly slip over her shoulder, exposing a crimson cloth underneath.
Why are you crying? You ask, as your fingers arranged the slipping robe. [Huuuuu, Sasuke just did that to touch Sakura. Nyeheheh.]Startled green-doe gaze looked at you, astonished.
It's graduation. She simply answered. One cries when something ends. [TT__TT Oh goodness, I can totally agree with her.]
Silly girl. You grunted, annoyed that she was (again) crying over childish things. It's not the end of the world. [LOL, this is what Jam told me when I cried with my friends.]
Your voice wanted to tremble, even slightly, because she was scrunching her face in an unexplained grimace. You needed to say it now, to end it here. Her tight fist now wiped her eyes angrily, smearing that glittering eye shadow on her lids.
Why are you so indifferent? Her voice shrieked, as she cannot really make anything out of her words clearly without screaming. We are not going to see each other! Don't you understand? [Oh Sakura, you make my heart clench painfully. TT_TT]
You clearly understood. It meant there would be no more puzzle for you to comprehend. No one who could amuse you with foolish antics (sigh). No one who could stand up to you with a hard backbone and manage to look so fragile. There would be no ridiculously, crazily obsessive (pretty) woman who would follow you up to the ends of the earth, wasting your precious time, only discover that she was only going to smile at you.
[Nyah, Sasuke, Sasuke will really miss her. Even her stalker ways]
Am I supposed to say goodbye? You cocked a slim, dark eyebrow. She growled, irritated at your nonchalance.
[LOL, sarcastic Sasuke surfaces.]
But she easily forgets. It is typical for her. This---your-impractical woman.
[Yeah, as if Sasuke would ever let her slip away.]
So when you yanked her arm (grudgingly) to place her head on your chest, and murmured that she looked annoying with mascara stains all over her face...
You meant to say that goodbyes are not meant to be forever.
^__________^, yeah. They would be together agaaaaain~! I had dedicated this to
psychedelic_aya
and yeah, four more commentaries to go. Never realized that this was going to be so enjoyable. LOL. It helps me revive my muses too. XDD