Defective

Aug 30, 2012 18:03

Title: Defective
Pairing: Jongyu
Length: 2261 words
Rating: PG13
Genre: au, fluff, friendship
Summary: Jinki was a lot of things. He also wasn't a lot of things. Simple as that.

Jinki was quiet. )

pg-13, !fanfic, jongyu, oneshot, au

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mikssi August 30 2012, 23:31:26 UTC
RESERVED FOR EMMA. c:

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bestplace August 31 2012, 02:04:54 UTC
oh my god.
oh. my. god.
kat what is this
what the fuck is this
oh my god i am crying
kat

asdfjklasf
omg

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bestplace August 31 2012, 02:42:40 UTC
OKAY WELL
THANK YOU FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART, LOVELY. YOU ARE SO PERFECT AND YOUR WRITING IS PERFECT AND YOU ARE LEGIT THE NICEST, WISEST PERSON I KNOW. AND I LOVE YOU OKAY??? I LOVE YOU THE MOST.

OKAY ASFJSDFKLJ READY TO QUOTE NOW

The way that Jonghyun sat in his seat, in a row by himself, slouched over his instrument with one earbud in his ear and the other hanging down over his untidy uniform, wasn't hurting anyone, was it? What bother was he, to sit and make music? this is so fucking BEAUTIFUL. NO IT'S NOT FUCKING HURTING ANYONE BACK THE FUCK UP AND LET JINKI LISTEN TO THIS BEAUTIFUL MUSIC. jonghyun is precious omfg alfjdsdfafdj

Jonghyun was looking up now, eyes round and surprised. THIS REACTION IS REALLY CUTE. ♥

because it felt really nice to make someone else laugh. it really is the nicest feeling in the world...;__; cute little awkward jinki making him laugh aawwhhh

Jinki feigned choking and went limp in Jonghyun's arms, slumping against him ( ... )

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mikssi September 11 2012, 04:55:35 UTC
I swear to god I thought I replied to this on your actual birthday FUCK.
sorry 'bout that :c

but anyway.
no I love you the most ;w; after all the times you've been there for me and everything, all the times you've listened to me bitch or we've bickered and been bros since the beginning, writing you a little oneshot is the least I can do, okay?? c':

fdjkslafa agree that making someone laugh is the best. so many warm fuzzies tbh c':

kjdjsfasljkfdfjksakfjdsajlfdsajkf making me squirm just re-reading this EMMA I JUST LOVE YOU SO MUCH OKAY

I'm so sososososoosososososososososo glad you liked this you have no idea, okay?? fjkkdsajfldsajfdsafjsdak also I love you the most okay OKAY DEAL.

<3

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bblingasaurus August 31 2012, 00:04:30 UTC
Can I just SOB AT THE PERFECTION THAT IS THIS FIC
This Jinki is so adorbs. Really, he is everything awkward. It's great.
"I don't know how to kiss," OH GOSH YOU PRECIOUS MAN I'LL HELPPP.
And Jonghyun. God that girl was such an ass. There are SO many girls like that in my school, ngl. This Jonghyun is sosososososososo cute I can't even.
You're the best.

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mikssi September 11 2012, 04:22:11 UTC
omg I'll sob with you because this comment is wonderful. ;w;

thank you so much for this c': I really appreciate it ^^

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goatapplepi August 31 2012, 01:14:19 UTC
MEDIOCRE? WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT? It was seriously very very good. Haha, i can't help but smile at Dubu's awkwardness. It's the best type. And HAPPY BIRTHDAY EMMA!!!! (for the... third? time).

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mikssi September 11 2012, 04:19:07 UTC
thank you ;w; awkward dubu is my favorite, yes, I agree XD

thank you so much for reading ^^

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dubuluvshinee August 31 2012, 02:28:03 UTC
I AM IN LOVE
I'M LIKE FREAKING SOBBING AT THIS WONDERFUL THING ORSJGDFGLFH
I love Jongyu. Jongyu is my favorite pairing ever and you just... you just... KAT
YOU
MAKE ME
WANT TO DANCE

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mikssi September 11 2012, 04:18:00 UTC
omg fjdslafjdslajfdsaljfdsal thank you so much ;w;

I'll dance with you. it can be a slow romantic waltz, okay?? c:

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dubuluvshinee September 11 2012, 16:00:54 UTC
yes a very slow and romantic waltz and I WILL SOB THE ENTIRE TIME OTL XD

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just2wings August 31 2012, 04:56:37 UTC
aw Onew spoke up! :D and I love that you used the word "shaggy" to describe his hair YES YES YES
Wow, your vocab is so researched/sought out with care in this piece I have to say!
Jinki wasn't good at making friends. :(
his sense of humor wasn't exactly eye-to-eye with his peers' a very elegant way to say Onew condition xD I love it
Jonghyun's cockiness OTL
oh you
And no, this wasn't mediocre. At all ^^

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mikssi September 11 2012, 04:17:13 UTC
shaggy is my favorite word to describe his hair because it's just the best word fjlkdsafds his hair is so wonderfully shaggy I love it

oh thank you ;w; I tried to write this more.. maturely (I guess?) than most of my other stuff. idk. XP

onew condition is always relevant. always

thank you, bb ;w;

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