What Was Lost [part 2]

Oct 12, 2012 18:53


Title: What Was Lost
Pairing: Onho
Length: 20,214 words
Rating: PG-15/R
Genre: au, fluff, angst
Summary: (Sequel to No Words Spared) Intervening that day on the bridge was a decision Jinki would never regret.
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r, !fanfic, onho, oneshot, !what was lost, au

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sweatnitemare October 15 2012, 01:01:00 UTC
That part when Jinki and Minho opened up his past, tears me apart. I was feeling offended for Jinki because he was so relunctant about it, so angry for his past but then it wouldn't be right if Minho didn't know anything about it, about his past. Oh my heart.

Minho's whining. He is so childish. Good thing Jinki loves to dote on him.

Their simple after-party birthday party was so sweet. Jinki sang for Minho despite his weak voice. I wanted to cry again! You know what, Minho's wish gonna be fulfilled because what I've heard, if you managed to blow all your candles at once, your wish will come true.

s/b: I purposely read this sequel as slow as possible because I just don't want this to end! Oh and sorry for babling. I just love this story.

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mikssi October 19 2012, 18:43:20 UTC
I know how you feel, man. jinki's past was really sad for me to write :c

minho is actually an overgrown 4-year-old XD

right??? he blew out the candles, so his wish definitely has to come true ^^

omg you're so sweet ;w; thank you so much for this comment c:

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acornmama October 15 2012, 09:18:48 UTC
I was almost inntears with them when Jinki relived it to write it and Minho rwad it. But then there was the cuteness of Minho telling Everyone about his boyfriend.

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mikssi October 19 2012, 18:44:33 UTC
I know, man, I know.. it was sad. and minho is a big dork ;w;

thank you for the comment c:

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wiltedluna October 18 2012, 10:59:18 UTC
"He didn't think he could fall in love after everything that happened, didn't think he was a person worth loving in return."

This was the part where I broke down crying. Your characters are so realistic, im sosososoo glad you wrote a sequel

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mikssi October 19 2012, 18:45:16 UTC
jfdsjaffdjslafk I'm glad you like it ;w; thank you so much c:

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eyesofdeathe October 25 2012, 20:03:38 UTC
Jinki's past is...so perfectly fitting for this. Kat you never fail to amaze me, and I loveloveLOVE this chapter <3
Onho is forever relevant and precious, and the whole misquoting thing is just too adorable~

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