Aug 16, 2004 20:52
red
just like roses
there they are
reflecting the sunligth throw my eyes
blade...
perfect sharpened steel blade
stretch of my body
soul of this soul
beauty that hypnotizes and hurts
make me suffer
make me die
make my last drop of pain dry and fall
just like petal of dead roses
Leave a comment
Comments 14
And the poem,is just perfect!!!!!Very sad,depressing,but just soo emotive!!loved it!
Besides the layout...your live journal is awesome!!!
Reply
mais é assim q deve ser pra mim, deprê e vil, s enão eu morro !=~~~
Reply
GREAT POETRY WORK!!
::shivers::
Your writings make me FEEL..
>>GO GIRL!!
*hugs*
*
Reply
i alwauys say, bad felling in the paper/screen are problems that u fell no longer
Reply
YES : YOU ARE SO RIGHT!!
*HUGS*
Thanks for making me smile.. :))
<3
*
Reply
<3
Reply
So fucking great! I luv your poesy, husband!
*________*
(tentando se comunication no english! ¬¬)
Reply
You're so good in what you do
Reply
Reply
eu não estou entrando na net essa semana pq meu pc querido foiu estuprado por uma força superior e está na assistência... >.< mas daqui a alguns dias ele volta...
Reply
Reply
Reply
se eu tivesse escrito isso com certeza em seguida teria me suicidado :)
beijão! e tu escreve muuuuuuito bem! \o/
Reply
Leave a comment