Opening the story on a boat would be a good idea, I think. Do you know where you want them going yet? A ginormous car dealership thingy would work. I don't know enough in the way of "business" or how any of that shat works to help much in that area but I think the money being left to him by his father is a good idea.
Maybe the house should be simple and secluded. Maybe it has a secret room or something?
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Opening the story on a boat would be a good idea, I think. Do you know where you want them going yet? A ginormous car dealership thingy would work. I don't know enough in the way of "business" or how any of that shat works to help much in that area but I think the money being left to him by his father is a good idea.
Maybe the house should be simple and secluded. Maybe it has a secret room or something?
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