W13 Fic - Post-MacPherson

[milena_d]

Spoilers for the FINALE of Warehouse 13!So I finished watching the finale a few hours ago now (and I have to get up for uni classes in 3 hours) but since then I've started a new Team!vid for Warehouse 13 and have just published a fic about a post-MacPherson scene on FF.net. Grief makes me very creative apparently (recall: the Kara vid I popped out

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[milena_d]

Thank you! ^_^ So do I, it's already killing me not having the season 2 premiere yet!

[drakeguard]

This was very nice, I had a similar thought only it was closer to the actual event having occurred. This was very well written, and Mrs. F was welll...Mrs. F and so was Claudia. I'd love to see this actually happen though, because I think we need more Mrs.F/Claudia interaction.

[milena_d]

Thank you so much! ^_^ so would I! I'd love to see an Mrs. F/Claudia scene that didn't involve being put on trial for treason. :P And thanks for your comments, characterization was really important for me so I'm glad I portrayed them well enough! ^_^

[drakeguard]

Mrs. F in her business mode is tough to nail down, I have yet to tackle that obstacle in my own writing, so I applaud anyone who can get her to sound right in my head. Claudia, I can't say anything about her, because really, Claudia is just herself and seems to be able to adapt to however folks write her, though when she's written well, like here, it's just awesome. It's easy to tell characterization is important to you, but with at least these two characters, you have them nailed down so pat yourself on the back and take a cookie! *hands over a plate of Artie's cookies* Just don't tell him I knicked them k?

I know right? I'd love to see a non-trial scene between them, I think they'd get along just great if Mrs. F wasn't after Claudia for suspected treason/knowing too much/causing havoc in the Warehouse (and I really want to see that scene too).

[flamingo_bandit]

Oh, I liked this! I really liked that you had Mrs. F come after her--it's both an obvious choice and somehow a surprising one. You did a great job balancing how Mrs. F balances both her businesslike dedication to the Warehouse and how deeply she cares about its people. Great work.

[milena_d]

Thank you so much! ^_^ I just figure that by process of elimination, if Pete and Myka are stuck, the only options are Mrs. F and...maybe Dickinson? :P

[scifi_tv_addict]

A great first fic for your shiny new fandom! I think you NAILED the voices of both Mrs. F and Claudia (especially Claudia). I can easily see this conversation in the premiere next season. I hope you're inspired to right more W13 stuff...perhaps a Myka/Pete/Claudia one? Those three are beyond hilarious together!

[milena_d]

Aww, thanks dude ^^ Totally dancing at your characterization praise! ^^ Myka/Pete/Claudia could definitely be in the stars, just gotta get back to a gleeful, non-mourning place if hilarity is what you're lucky for. ;)

[luna_dove]

Very, very nice. I feel very sorrier for Claudia since reading this fic. I loved the Mrs. Frederic and Claudia interaction in the finale too, even though we only got around three minutes of it.

[milena_d]

Thank you so much! My heart hurts for Claudia, especially now that she's been almost forced out of the only home she really knew. :( So did I! I hope we get a lot more in Season 2 (if everything works out for her :S).