"Our Lives As Happenstance" - Epilogue

Nov 27, 2009 21:46


Title: Our Lives As Happenstance
Author: Milena D.
Rating: T (PG-13) for now
Genre: Action/Angst/Romance
Pairings: Daniel/Vala, some Cam/Sam can be seen as shippy
SPOILERS: HUGE SPOILERS FOR CONTINUUM.
Summary: A divergence in the lives of our team from one of the last scenes of the movie causes their future to change radically and permanently. ( Read more... )

[fics: sg-1] cam/sam, [fics: sg-1] daniel/vala

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natalia5345 November 28 2009, 03:05:30 UTC
ahhh i adore this. and you. the number of times i laughed out loud is insane. the first being ARE YOU ON CORN and it just went on from there right to poor cam being grossed out at the end ;). I like how you wrapped it up though, a little unexpected but fantastic! i loved the Adria nod at the end as well.

overall amazing, as i expected totally made my night.

(i will even refrain from going on a rant about how sam could never be truly happy without Jack ;) )

magnificent work dear, so happy you could finish it and that you are back to writing and i can't wait to see what comes next! (AGFA right? right? riiiiiiight? :) heehee)

looooooooooove tali

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milena_d December 29 2009, 02:57:00 UTC
Finally, someone appreciates my corny humour ;) ...okay, that was bad :P but thanks, beautiful! I seem to have caught a lot of people by surprise which just tickles me pink ;)

Something of the sort might be happening...we shall have to see what time brings :P

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natalia5345 December 29 2009, 03:00:48 UTC
as long as you aren't tickled blue. cause that would mean you had stopped breathing. and were dead. and then there would be no more fic. saaaaaaad.

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milena_d December 29 2009, 03:42:04 UTC
Lol, although I wouldn't have to go back to school so I don't know, it's good and it's bad ;)

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review from acer-sigma anonymous November 28 2009, 04:12:22 UTC
Great ending, and funny to boot! Daniel certainly was an idiot, and Cam was right to abandon him to the tender mercies of his pregnant wife. Which I admit was a surprise, given the short amount of time that they knew each other in this timeline. The arguments of why they got together, were nicely put together, and Daniel's reassurance were nicely heartfelt and sweet.

Love how SG-1 has managed to find a role for themselves in that timeline. Not surprising (don't know why they were surprised with Vala's contribution, she always had something up her sleaves) it involves making trouble for the Goa'uld. ;)

Anyways, good story, sorry to see it end, but I am looking forward to seeing the next one!

acer-sigma

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Re: review from acer-sigma milena_d December 29 2009, 03:40:55 UTC
Thanks Acer! They do tend to make themselves useful (at least to themselves) when they land somewhere :P Thanks for your review and sorry for the huge tardiness of it!

Happy Holidays! :D

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campylobacter November 30 2009, 00:26:07 UTC
Oh, YAY! I love happy endings; Daniel & Vala have the potential for such heartbreaking angst, that going for a bright and optimistic finish is, for me, what I look for in fanfic as Wright & Co. seem to prefer fighter jets, explosions and open endings.

Speaking of boyfic, the opening to this chapter is clever, and not until Vala launched the centerpiece did I suspect it wasn't a classic SG-1 firefight.

Are you on corn?

Epic. I MUST HAVE THAT ON AN ICON. It's the SG-1 equivalent of WTF?

"I said if I'd known what a horror show we'd turn out to be I would have sacrificed the decade trying to rebuild it."

Daniel Whumping entirely justified here. Heck, his life should alternate between hot sex and whumpage. Go Vala!

When all he heard from his friend was rustling material, he glanced over to find his former best friend trying to get his white tank top off.

Stop. Teasing. Me. Shirtless!Cam + Contrite!Daniel + Passionate!Vala = OT3. Hot like whoa.

She has cravings I have to tend to at every single hour and god forbid it passes ( ... )

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milena_d December 29 2009, 03:37:55 UTC
I completely agree ^^ I love/need my happy endings :P

Speaking of boyfic, the opening to this chapter is clever, and not until Vala launched the centerpiece did I suspect it wasn't a classic SG-1 firefight.

Thank you! Misdirection is something I'm trying to sink my teeth into...baby steps though :P

Epic. I MUST HAVE THAT ON AN ICON. It's the SG-1 equivalent of WTF?

It IS! And the perfect insider SG-1 fan joke ;P

Daniel Whumping entirely justified here. Heck, his life should alternate between hot sex and whumpage. Go Vala!

Again, ITA. Were that his two states of being, I'd be a very happy woman :P

LOL! As a false god & queen to Ba'al for 50 years, Qetesh was undoubtedly accustomed to some very rare, very decadent treats that Daniel would need a supply of naquadah to procure.

LOOL! I hadn't even considered that! You're so right, poor Daniel would have had to scour the galaxy for what she's used to :P

Because if they'd been considering Janet, Jacob, Claire, Sha're, Charlie, Skaara, or Jack, I'd have to SPORK MYSELF. Honestly ( ... )

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campylobacter December 29 2009, 09:26:27 UTC
Honestly, eh? :P Not that I don't love 'em all to pieces but there's only so many people you can name after special people...

I mean no offense to the characters; I love them too much for their names to become badfic cliche namesakes, because it seems every bad babyfic does this:


... )

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milena_d December 29 2009, 20:05:07 UTC
OMG that SP-esque .gif is epic *snort* Totally on the money :P

Don't worry; I've had to go into airplane mode when I had fanfic deadlines looming. You can only do so much when you're being productive.

Exactly. Though it does suck sometimes :P

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kazzy December 4 2009, 09:24:30 UTC
Vala=love. Such a nice ending to this fic - and not necessarily an expected one. Well done for making it believable. :)

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milena_d December 29 2009, 03:04:41 UTC
Thank you! ^_^ All my efforts went into making it logical and believable, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review and sorry this reply is so late!!

Happy Holidays!

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strwrsdsnyprncs January 13 2010, 19:01:26 UTC
What a wonderful fic! I was captivated from the get-go! Nicely written!

There's only a few grammer errors that I saw, but otherwise, nicely done!

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milena_d February 17 2010, 19:07:20 UTC
Sorry this is so late in coming but...Thank you so much! :D Yeah, lol, by the time I was posting this I just wanted it out. One day I'm going to have to go back and get all my fics in ship-shape. Thanks again for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed the story! :D

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