first of all: /aggressively flips you the middle finger
second of all: wHA T THE FUCK
okay wait let me start officially by saying screw you for the ending lines how the hell am I supposed to create a decent fic i'm going to FAIL
/squeals bc cyborg!sehun
/cries bc jongin's father
/cries bc jongin and sehun are both probably pining for each other
/cries bc screw society lET THEM LOVE
"He watches you the whole time. Did you know that?" seriously you have no idea how bad this killed me oh mt god /sings/ and the tears stream down my faceeeeee
i don't even know how to express how perfect and equally heartbreaking this is i'm such a mess and i hate you but ugh /claps
i'm gonna stop rambling now and imagine jongin and sehun overcoming the odds and being happy mhm yes i love you <3
Your start made me crack up out loud oh my god I'm dying. I'm sorry I'm an emotional mess today this fic had to happen this way! Also like I want to write a proper dystopian au so bad but I don't trust my skills yet so this is the closest I can get to that for now. It would need more research and vocabulary expanding... I'm not ready for that yet lol (also million other fics to write... sigh).
Yes they are definitely pining after each other and in my head Sehun knows whose son Jongin is and he still can't stop himself from hoping and Jongin knows Sehun longs for him too and he can't be with him because of his family but he hopes too. It's sad and tragic but if I made it into a longfic it would most likely have a happy ending lmao. I have no idea about this story in particular tho.
Ahh it always makes me so happy when you get feels from my fics and when you like them, I appreciate it a lot. Thank you for being so nice about my writing always /bows. I shall try and write more sekai fics now that I have time because jfc we all need them.
i demand a longer ver of this with a happy ending! this is only acceptable bc it's a drabble otherwise i'd be screaming at you bc it's ending like this!!! :<
cyborg!sehun is an au i haven't read in a while; actually i don't think i ever read one?? so yes, go on and write more of this, add more cliches too since this is already pretty much cliche with a romeo and juliet like setting - jongin as juliet whose family would never approve of romeo!sehun ;u; but pls don't end it with character death ok OTL
also why did you complain about writing skills??? when your writing is really good?? your plot is great as well, pretty unique, too and i'm pretty sure you can write lots more great fics in the future c:
Writes this from mobile so prepare for typos bc I did not wanna forget for any longer....
BASICCALLLLY ONE BIG ASS EFF YOU FROM ME. I cannot deal with Sehun staring at Jongin, Jongin refusing to look at him and THEN he looks when Sehun turns around. Sorta like avoiding the obvious feels there. *roadroages*
But I can easily picture this as a longfic. For someone who says they cannot write your fic so far is the easiet to imagine in it's own world and just like a preveiw of more to come. Means you will be the senpai soon. ^^
AnywAYS, I really liked it. A lot. Interesting. Unique. And I hope you write more of this au.
And this was only a few hrs late..../looks away shamefully...
i can't believe you were even worried about this fic because I'm literally so so so impressed????????? like wow?????? you keep referring to yourself as a rookie-sekai author, but i would have believed it if this story had come from someone who had years of writing sekai. if this is you now i really want to see how you evolve in the future lol.
I love how you took the sentence i ended my drabble with and turned it into a dystopian au! that was probably the farthest from my expectations. I am so mad at Jongins father i hope he disappears into the jungle somewhere so that sekai can live their happily, cyborg ever after. pining!jongin and sehun made my heart ache. they both like each other stop being stupid!
"He watches you the whole time. Did you know that?" Jongin wanted to answer, to say no, I didn't, but there was a lump in his throat and he didn't trust his voice. He ended up just shaking his head.
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first of all: /aggressively flips you the middle finger
second of all: wHA T THE FUCK
okay wait let me start officially by saying screw you for the ending lines how the hell am I supposed to create a decent fic i'm going to FAIL
/squeals bc cyborg!sehun
/cries bc jongin's father
/cries bc jongin and sehun are both probably pining for each other
/cries bc screw society lET THEM LOVE
"He watches you the whole time. Did you know that?" seriously you have no idea how bad this killed me oh mt god /sings/ and the tears stream down my faceeeeee
i don't even know how to express how perfect and equally heartbreaking this is i'm such a mess and i hate you but ugh /claps
i'm gonna stop rambling now and imagine jongin and sehun overcoming the odds and being happy mhm yes i love you <3
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Your start made me crack up out loud oh my god I'm dying. I'm sorry I'm an emotional mess today this fic had to happen this way! Also like I want to write a proper dystopian au so bad but I don't trust my skills yet so this is the closest I can get to that for now. It would need more research and vocabulary expanding... I'm not ready for that yet lol (also million other fics to write... sigh).
Yes they are definitely pining after each other and in my head Sehun knows whose son Jongin is and he still can't stop himself from hoping and Jongin knows Sehun longs for him too and he can't be with him because of his family but he hopes too. It's sad and tragic but if I made it into a longfic it would most likely have a happy ending lmao. I have no idea about this story in particular tho.
Ahh it always makes me so happy when you get feels from my fics and when you like them, I appreciate it a lot. Thank you for being so nice about my writing always /bows. I shall try and write more sekai fics now that I have time because jfc we all need them.
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this is only acceptable bc it's a drabble otherwise i'd be screaming at you bc it's ending like this!!! :<
cyborg!sehun is an au i haven't read in a while; actually i don't think i ever read one?? so yes, go on and write more of this, add more cliches too since this is already pretty much cliche with a romeo and juliet like setting - jongin as juliet whose family would never approve of romeo!sehun ;u; but pls don't end it with character death ok OTL
also why did you complain about writing skills??? when your writing is really good?? your plot is great as well, pretty unique, too and i'm pretty sure you can write lots more great fics in the future c:
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BASICCALLLLY ONE BIG ASS EFF YOU FROM ME. I cannot deal with Sehun staring at Jongin, Jongin refusing to look at him and THEN he looks when Sehun turns around. Sorta like avoiding the obvious feels there. *roadroages*
But I can easily picture this as a longfic. For someone who says they cannot write your fic so far is the easiet to imagine in it's own world and just like a preveiw of more to come. Means you will be the senpai soon. ^^
AnywAYS, I really liked it. A lot. Interesting. Unique. And I hope you write more of this au.
And this was only a few hrs late..../looks away shamefully...
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I love how you took the sentence i ended my drabble with and turned it into a dystopian au! that was probably the farthest from my expectations. I am so mad at Jongins father i hope he disappears into the jungle somewhere so that sekai can live their happily, cyborg ever after. pining!jongin and sehun made my heart ache. they both like each other stop being stupid!
"He watches you the whole time. Did you know that?" Jongin wanted to answer, to say no, I didn't, but there was a lump in his throat and he didn't trust his voice. He ended up just shaking his head.
why would you do this ow ;;
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why cant they love each other whyyyyyyy my babiesssssss
this could totes be the introduction of a longer fic.... i just want sekai to be happyyyyyy
this was nicely written - good job!!
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