[FIC] I'm Waiting for That Setting Sun to Burn Me, Thor/Loki

[milky_haven]

I’m Waiting for That Setting Sun to Burn Me

Thor/Loki

Beta-ed by the ever lovely silverlynxcat.
Other mistakes are mine.

Comments

[sphinxofthenile]

Another lovely fic from you. It just comes together so beautifully, Thor taking the fall with Loki and trying to make amends in his own way.

Would you mind if I stalked friended you? :)

[milky_haven]

Poor, poor Thor. Seriously, he is the most pitiful in here because to him, this is his ultimate punishment as he is to be blamed for Loki's downfall.

AJAKALKAJKDLASLJALJSAJL YESSSSS PLEASE DO STALKED ME (because I would totally do the same to you)! *squeezes you*

I want to tell you that I always adore your writing because you always have this amazing flair for words. <3

[sphinxofthenile]

It's actually really great, Thor's capacity to feel so much remorse and be willing to go out of his way to fix things. It's one of the most moving things about him as a character.

OMG. WHAT. I mean, thank you, what a lovely thing to say! Especially when it is someone whose writing you love and then you are like ahgsfdhasfdafg RAINBOWS. *glomps you*

[k_undertoe]

Beautiful... I especially like the line you use to describe Thor's situation; so many writers in this trope say that Thor fell too, but here, and the difference is important, he jumps. Wow. For me that was a small but fundamentally striking change.

[milky_haven]

yussssss you actually notice that! Thor jumps!!! I was thinking that none of my readers would notice it BUT YOU DID XD

Thank you so much for your amazing and wonderful feedback! *glomps you*

[k_undertoe]

Heheh~ it was very subtly done, which I quite enjoyed but was unduly pleased with myself for noticing, like " I see what that author did there, yes I do!"

*return glomps* I'm glad I took the time to drop the note, and that you liked it :)

[yukiko_angel]

Wow this is a powerful story to read. The beauty of it and Loki, even wihout a memory, whishes for his brother.

And Veur(Thor) hating what he has done that was part of Loki's madness. It makes the feeling of Broken!loki stonger and sadder.

[milky_haven]

Thor and Loki are broken in their own way after The Fall. Thor trying to make amends in his own way and still blaming and hating himself while Loki just doesn't want to have his memory back but hoping for his brother to come back for him.

Thank you so much for your lovely feedback dear. <3

[sunny_rainfall]

how poignant and lovely