bring me the disco king [spn][one-shot]

Nov 15, 2010 02:35

Title: Bring Me the Disco King
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters: Sam, Lucifer (Dean, John)
Word Count: 2,410
Rating: R
Warnings: Gore. Violence. Graphic Imagery.
Summary: This is how he kills you after you’re dead.
Notes: I wrote this during the summer hiatus, but never completed it because I wasn't sure what it was doing. It is now complete. I ( Read more... )

one-shot, supernatural: fanfiction

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wintersjuly November 15 2010, 12:00:40 UTC
oh my god - just. i think you ripped dean's heart out, stomped it to pieces and then let lucifer set it on fire. in front of sam.

oh jesus, this hurts and it's so chilling and the punishment and torture fits sam to a tee. dean's hell is different because dean is different. sam's hell is about being abandoned, about losing things - humanity, people, purpose, understanding. i can't even articulate how much i just loved this - i read it, had to stop and read it again just to fully understand the horror of sam's hell.

*MEMS LIKE MAD*

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vikingprincess November 15 2010, 12:10:57 UTC
this is amazing and painful and gorgeous

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roxymissrose November 15 2010, 13:16:22 UTC
What an amazing way of showing Sam's torture in hell. It makes sense to me that opposed to Dean's decades of physical torture, Sam's would center around mental torture. I'd love it if the show went that way--what would it mean to the boys if this was the way it went for Sam?

All the scenes were wonderfully creepy and horrifying.

And I love your title!

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tifaching November 15 2010, 13:25:01 UTC
Good God. You may have no idea what it was doing, but I should have known that what it would do was rip my heart out. Your stories have the ability to do that in an absolutely awesome way.

Poor Sam. All those might have beens. And Lucifer there to offer false comfort every time.

Beautifully painful.

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tversan November 15 2010, 15:13:34 UTC
ow. Oh, poor Sam. Poor, poor Sam.

An amazing story!

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