the frozen hours [spn][one-shot]

[mimblexwimble]

Title: The Frozen Hours
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters: Sam, John, Dean
Word Count: 1,300
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: highlight to read child abuse, brief allusions to possible sexual abuse.
Summary: AU. It was just five dollars. It was just a field trip. This is just the punishment.
Notes: Old fic written for last year's blindfold_spn. Shameful cliches, etc.

Comments

[geckoholic]

Oh, wow, shit. SAMMY! You paint an awful picture here, but you do so well.

Apart from the actual violence, which is horrible, I find this brutal on a different level: It's in your blood and you have to fight it.. But this, this might just be worse: What're you gonna do if Dean up and leaves one day 'cause he couldn't stand to look at you?

[debbiel66]

Guh. Grim and terrifying and so the path that could have been.

Nobody tells a story quite like you.

[embroiderama]

D: Gah, this hurt to read, but the whole thing is so vivid.

[shescheeky]

Noooo! But yes at the same time. You should write more in this. I could read more.

[alxtorres33]

Oh Jesus, this was so horrifying and the whole time I had this ugly feeling in my stomach and now I can't seem to get rid of it. Poor Sammy and Dean I can't help but be angry at him because he's supposed to protect Sammy but he's just a kid I know. This was just amazing so much was said without anything having to be said at all. I would love to read a whole series of this, maybe where Sam escapes? Thank you for this!