on another's sorrow [spn][one-shot]

May 30, 2012 00:06

Title: on another's sorrow
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters: John, Dean, Sam
Word Count: 2,800
Rating: PG
Summary: It's been eight months, but John's back.
Notes: Third in the Innocence 'verse (de-aged Dean). Title from William Blake. Even though this has nothing to do with the poem. At all.

on another's sorrow )

one-shot, #621, innocence 'verse, supernatural: fanfiction

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scrimsone May 30 2012, 18:54:36 UTC
so awesome! Dean's "I CALLED YOU. I CALLED YOU EVERYDAY!" did it for me.

gah! stuck between laughing and crying, 's too much awesomeness.

You write so gooood, it's legendary. I love your de-aged Dean verse...well, I love any de-aged Dean fic but yours is awesome like this perfect blend of angsty adorable.

You know what's awesome?
You, this fic, door-slamming Dean and Sam with his floppy socks. Okay, and John too for coming back.

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mimblexwimble June 2 2012, 20:12:27 UTC
Thank you so much!

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maypoles May 30 2012, 19:31:37 UTC
Dean's explosion at the end killed me. ;_;

You write such great family dynamics, and I think this is an all-around lovely 'verse. <333

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mimblexwimble June 2 2012, 20:13:52 UTC
Thank you!

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scarletscarlet May 30 2012, 20:03:48 UTC
Oh my goodness. I hadn't seen these before. I appear to have developed some kind of spontaneous leak in the vicinity of my eyeballs; not quite sure what's going on there.

Heartbreaking, wow. And Sam at sixteen, having to cope like that, theorising at the start that other people manage it so he must be able to, and going without so wee Dean eats enough... I think it only gets *more* distressing when one thinks about that being situation-normal for so many people out there. And he's trying so hard, poor kid.

Your four year old Dean is kind of amazing - he seems so very likely, and of course, god, he *just* lost his mum at the start there. I think I'd be quite happy to never stop reading about them like this, but it is so sad right now.

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mimblexwimble June 2 2012, 20:14:50 UTC
I'm so, so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you!

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sirensung May 30 2012, 22:15:43 UTC
;__; I love this verse so much. Your Sam and Dean are amazing. <3

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mimblexwimble June 2 2012, 20:15:02 UTC
Thank you! That means so much to me. <3

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katsheswims May 31 2012, 01:15:54 UTC
Oh, poor boys. If John can do anything right he should take Sam and Dean to go live with Ellen or Bobby!

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mimblexwimble June 2 2012, 20:15:13 UTC
He'd better! Thanks for reading!

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