my life's come off its tracks [spn][four]

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Comments

[velvetmagras]

This was just so... wow. Absolutely wonderful and so very well-written, the boys' voices were perfect. Such a fab story.

[mimblexwimble]

Thank you so much!

[kjfri]

holy crap! that was an amazing ride! It was absolutely pitch-perfect little kid inner voices, thought processes. Wonderful!! I hope someday to see more of this story- a fractured but strong Winchester family!!!

[mimblexwimble]

Thank you! I definitely hope to write more in this 'verse. :)

[faege]

Meep. *bites back teary grin* This? Epic cuteness. I swear, I kept waiting for something really horrible to happen (yes, I know, I'm a horrible person, Dean becoming mute in the fourth grade isn't horrible enough). But I mean, I kept waiting for Sam to be abducted or something (see? Flashback to your BB story. Gosh, that thing still haunts me). So Sam running around narrating life in Sam-speak--the adorable almost killed me. And then switching to Dean's POV was great too. But Sam was made of win here. He got all twirled up in my heartstrings and then tripped over them. So they hurt, but it was a good hurt.

And I'm really making a habit of leaving incoherent reviews. But I guess you can say that you make me speechless. Because it's mostly true. :D

[mimblexwimble]

AHAHA! I'd be expecting bad things to happen too, hee. I don't have a very good track record where schmoop is concerned.

Sam abducted my brain so I'm really glad you thought he was cute. He's a crazy little five-year-old who loves his brother to pieces.

Incoherent reviews? Are awesome. :D

[canter76]

You broke my heart.

This is one of the best wee!chester stories I've ever read. The first parts with the wee!Sam pov was just so spot on. The way you wrote little Sammy's thought process was excellent. His view of what was happening to Dean, and the grown-ups made the reality of Dean's sickness so much sharper and more terrifying.
And later, when you switched to Dean's pov. I felt so bad for what he was going through, and he was so brave, but still a little boy.

I also liked the way you wrote John. I love it when writers show him as a loving father, trying his best.

Again, bravo on an excellent story.

[mimblexwimble]

This is pretty much my first wee!chester fic - and it's my first fic of any sort where the characters are so very young, so I'm really flattered you enjoyed it.

I tried my best to make John more like the canon not-so-great-dad we know, but it just wouldn't happen. I thought Sam and Dean had enough going on without adding a father who isn't to the mix. Plus, I love John and do think he always tried his best.

Thank you so much!

[emeraldus]

Awww, how sweet! Nicely captured, how simple and yet complex a child's world is.

[mimblexwimble]

Thank you!