[drabble] "rosso di sera, bel tempo si spera"

Sep 25, 2009 01:14

Title: "Rosso di sera, bel tempo si spera"
Series: Hetalia
Characters/Pairings: North Italy, Holy Roman Empire
Words: 254
Rating: PG
Summary: Written for hetalia_contest's prompt, "sky."

And he feels that he is blessed... )

aph, fic

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chromatic_coma September 25 2009, 13:09:52 UTC
Aw, so beautiful~ Poor Italy...

There's a lot of emotion in so little space, and it really is a lovely job well done. Interesting take on the prompt.

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min19 September 25 2009, 14:12:14 UTC
Ahahah, I'm worried that I tried to stuff too much emotion in so little space. :'D But thank you so so much, it really makes me happy to hear that!! &hearts&hearts&hearts

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chromatic_coma September 26 2009, 02:33:43 UTC
No, it's perfect <33

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harosketch September 25 2009, 19:14:19 UTC
That was an unusual take on 'sky'. I liked how it was different and there was so much depth to it... Beautiful ♥

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min19 September 25 2009, 19:25:26 UTC
t-THANK YOU SO MUCH &hearts my heart is swelling from happiness, thanks for reading/commenting ;u;

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harosketch September 25 2009, 19:28:57 UTC
Your fic deserved it, so my pleasure :)

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ykyapril September 26 2009, 01:55:15 UTC
;_; Poor Italia...

I love your take on this :) The emotion is almost tangible, and I absolutely lovelovelove that scene when HRE dies...

Great job! :)

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min19 September 28 2009, 01:16:54 UTC
THANK YOU SO MUCH!! &hearts&hearts&hearts i'm really glad you like it. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment ;u;

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moirae September 28 2009, 06:19:21 UTC
the image of the sky darkening that then beginning to light up again was very well done and touching, and i have to imagine what a different fic this would be if you hadn't added in those last few lines. overall, the fic was so well-done, dear--i've been waiting for you to enter, again! &hearts

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min19 September 30 2009, 00:25:41 UTC
T-THANK YOU!! It really means a lot to hear that from you, seriously &hearts&hearts&hearts !!! Thanks so much for reading/commenting. I hope I have enough time to enter again soon, I had a lot of fun with this. :D

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