With hands behind his back 2/2

Oct 27, 2010 21:23


Title: With hands behind his back 2/2
(I totally made this one up just now, for the working title read A/N below)
Author: mindor 
Disclaimer: If they were mine, I wouldn't suffer through the pain that is writing about them.
Pairing: Pinto
Word: ~3030
Rating/Warnings: NC-17, BDSM (leaning toward D/S rather than S/M...for now, they never behave the way I ( Read more... )

fic, pinto

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snakelights October 30 2010, 00:34:29 UTC
so good

so very very good.

I want to see more of Chris's "dark side". I can just see Chris diving deeper and deeper into it and having Chris be capable of continually meeting Zach's needs much to both of their shocks.

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mindor October 30 2010, 11:51:45 UTC
Yeah, Chris totally has hidden depths Zach has no idea about. Well, probably not even Chris has much of an idea about his own darker side yet, but Zach's there to help him out. :)

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monkeyonthelam November 4 2010, 15:47:36 UTC
Some of my favorite lines:

“You said you get nasty. C’mon Zach, let your inner bitch come out and play, I wanna meet her.”

“All right, come snuggle me you giant baby!” Chris spreads his arms and snickers when Zach ewww-s, but goes willingly, curling himself around Chris’s body so they can fit on the small couch.

And the entire last paragraph. Perfection.

Although I skimmed the part in the first chapter where Zach discusses all the various kinks. I hope you don't mind.

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mindor November 15 2010, 07:23:58 UTC
I fail at commenting, I'M SO SORRY MONKEY!

Of course I don't mind, I don't want to make anyone uncomfortable, I'm glad you took a chance on reading even if it's not your flavour.

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aliassmith November 14 2010, 11:39:58 UTC
Wow. This was... Hot doesn't even begin to cover it. The way you hinted at Zach's previous training, and watching Chris come into his own as a Dom was all so damn enticing... I'm officially becoming your groupie. Like I said-- Wow.

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mindor November 15 2010, 07:25:38 UTC
Yay for being mutual groupies! *adjusts rose petals on your shrine*

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garden_hoe21 December 1 2010, 23:55:21 UTC
...dayum.

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