you held me down in this starlit city

[mindscomeloose]

title: you held me down in this starlit city
rating: pg
pairing: tom/sean
word count: 3,910
author: me (mindscomeloose)
disclaimer: this never happpened. i unfortunately do not own them.
summary: “hey, are you all right?” the girl nods insistently but begins to cry again, the tears making trails down her cheeks to pool at her chin. the sheer devastation

Comments

[sydneysconverse]

This was freaking awesome! Seriously. I loved her notes. And I loved how she said their love was like a butterfly!

[mindscomeloose]

Thank you!

[anonymous]

This was lovely.

[mindscomeloose]

Thank you!

[ofvanity]

This was interesting, I like how you took the perspective of someone outside of their relationship this time. It's always refreshing to see how others view their relationship. I, personally, don't like Audrey Kitching, but it was sweet to see how people who have their shit together would inspire her to get hers together.

Great work, :)

[mindscomeloose]

Thank you, doll. ♥

[shattered_ink]

I HAVE JUST DECIDED THAT VULNERABLE AUDREY IS MY FAVORITE AUDREY. you did some seriously great characterization with her in this fic. especially in that last letter. ALSO, ALSO, ALSO the idea of Sean and Tom becoming sort of adoptive parents for someone, especially Audrey, is pretty much awesome. their relationship in this is so freaking domestic and understated and perfect. LASTLY, I will just leave this excellent quote here: "she thinks that they hold onto love like a butterfly: delicately, in cupped hands, as if it could fly away at any moment. they don’t chase it down with nets or up trees or search for it under rocks. audrey thinks there’s something to be learned from that." YES. YES. YES. that is all! ♥

[mindscomeloose]

do you know how good it is to have you back? answer: no, you do not.
really good. thank you so much for your flailing and i am so pleased that you enjoyed it. :)