{one} Sin S(e)oul

[minewsadvocate]

title: Sin S(e)oul
word count: 3043w
pairing: Onho, Jongkey
genre: crime, drama, action, romance
overall rating: NC-17
warning: Presence of violence, (consensual and not) sex, prostitution, gambling and mafia activities in general
summary: What happens when you become part of a powerful organization that could make you feel alive as much as dead? And

Comments

[sweatnitemare]

It's ok if its slow. It had to be anyway with this kind of genre, dark, angsty, sexy.

Oh my MiNew, I need them but I will be patient and follow your story's development.

I can't wait for more. Thank you for writing this up.

[minewsadvocate]

I promise I'll give you a lot of Minew scenes when the time comes =D

And thanks, knowing that there are a lot of people who like slow fics I don't feel discouraged anymore^^

And thank you for commenting this up :P

[queenhinata]

I rarely have read OnHo as the main pairing but all those warnings caught my attention XD I love reading mob and prostitution fics, so yay! I positively enjoyed reading the Prologue and first chapter! MinKey's unfriendly relationship is pretty hilarious. Hehe that's my OTP.

I look forward to the next chapter <3

[minewsadvocate]

I think 'warnings' should be changed to 'alluring stuff' XD since they don't stop really people from reading :P (totally the opposite)

I'm really glad you decided to read it even if you don't usually read Onho^^

actually, I think I can only write this kind of fic xD Idk my mind is obsessed with this kind of stuff (like mob and crime in general) and I wish I had some knowledge in economics and law just to make it more... realistic? I'll try to do my best though^^

Minkey bicker a lot, but they have known each other since years so their friendship is solid too^^

Thanks for you comment~

[princessliette]

woah woah woah
This nice and i love longfic even if it will have more than 50 chapts >< seriously ><

Onho + jongkey (+ jungtae, i know there wont be any jungtae here but i kinda stalked your twitter and i saw your tweet about jungtae and i was like 'oh gosh! She likes jungtae too omg!' and so i cant help to put jungtae here in my comment xD) = PURRFECT!!

I'm not good with words so i cant write long comment but at least i can tell you that i know i will really enjoy reading this amazing fic ><

Hwaiting girl! Keep writing! I will support you fully! :D and i cant wait to read next chapter to know what happened to key and jjong D:

[minewsadvocate]

I think I just found my mind reader....... I won't tell you why though xD

Yeah I don't think it will ever reach 50 chapters xD But it will be long... cause the more I think about the whole plot, the more I add stuff to happen.

And yeah, Onho + Jongkey + JungTae are the perfect OTPs ** I don't know if you know some JungTae fics... because I haven't found a single one yet, which makes me soooo disappointed ;___;

Anyway, thank you for your support, for your comment, for adding me on twitter (and for stalking my twitter xD) ^^

<3

[princessliette]

You haven't found even 1 jungtae fics?? woah! i wrote JungTae fics xD and unfortunately only few authors wrote about them D: and it's been a long time since i found one so i kinda can't remember D: sorry >

[minewsadvocate]

OMG /runs off to read/

[chevalierlee]

how was chapter 1? <= i like :P
but where is my minew/onho ? :O
oh ok .. I've to wait right? hehehe ~~~

let me give you a better comment later /since it's like 4 am here and I need some sleep or maybe a nap ;~~~~;

[minewsadvocate]

glad you liked it bb^^

aww well you actually know when minew meet each other xD so you are a step ahead :P

you don't have to give me a better comment^^ this one is just perfect <3

[chevalierlee]

i don't care if in chapter 6 they aren't know each other yet .. just yeah
I just can't wait to read .... 'that scene' bb XD

/cheer u up/
*insert minew hug .gif here* :P

[minewsadvocate]

Well.... they don't know each other in chap 7 too xD
Seriously everyone is gonna suffer... I know because I'd have craven for Minew ever since the first chapter xD

Thanks for that gif xD