{one} Sin S(e)oul

[minewsadvocate]

title: Sin S(e)oul
word count: 3043w
pairing: Onho, Jongkey
genre: crime, drama, action, romance
overall rating: NC-17
warning: Presence of violence, (consensual and not) sex, prostitution, gambling and mafia activities in general
summary: What happens when you become part of a powerful organization that could make you feel alive as much as dead? And

Comments

[argh]

I am sorry for taking so long to read this ;__;! But finalllllllly I had some time^^ and I felt like reading

[minewsadvocate]

I'm glad you managed to find the time to read it^^

I was happy you thought the prologue was 'amazing' and now and I'm even more happy you re-read it and like it more :) Well I think the prologue is much better than the rest of the fic… cause well, as I said to others the whole fic is based on the prologue.

I'm happy you noticed the change of feeling. I wanted to create suspense with the prologue and make the chapter 1 to have a complete different mood. Even Minho who feels worried about something is happy at the end…

I don't want you to feel pressure about me dedicating this fic to you. I wasn't expecting this comment to be honest, I don't expect you to comment on every single chapter..

Minew aren't getting together any time soon, they will have… interactions. You know I don't like them to be together not until the end.

You don't suck at commenting, this comment was perfect^^

Thank you <3 I love you too.

[reallystorygirl]

Non mi dispiace affatto l'introduzione di Kyuhyun come personaggio, come barista credo che ci stia abbastanza bene anche se, se proprio devo dire la mia, come Suju avrei preferito Sungmin, Ryewook o Donghae essendo i miei preferiti, ma non credo ci sarebbero stati altrettanto bene in questo personaggio