{two} Sin S(e)oul

[minewsadvocate]

title: Sin S(e)oul
word count: 3452w
pairing: Onho, Jongkey
genre: crime, drama, action, romance
overall rating: NC-17
warning: Presence of violence, (consensual and not) sex, prostitution, gambling and mafia activities in general
summary: What happens when you become part of a powerful organization that could make you feel alive as much as dead? And

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[minewsadvocate]

spot for hitoshisakurai <3

[hitoshisakurai]

I was about to spot myself with a speed of light when I saw you updated but you left me a spot and awwww thank you ;~~~~; BRB TO READ AND COMMENT

[hitoshisakurai]

/is late again
So many amazing things in this chapter, gosh >w< I absolutely love Key's & Nicole's friendship. It's so precious and they fit together so perfectly and I was spazzing hard while reading this chappie of yours ;3 I wonder who's her boyfriend tho... *tries to think of a guy that Key would like besides Jjong* hmm... Junho? X"D
This- "but he was also supposed to have a date with Jonghyun (a date for Kibum, a friendly hang out for the older boy)" is absolutely precious and so familiar... don't we all sometimes think this way when we get to hang out with our crush? Awwww ;w

[minewsadvocate]

hahaha One of the reasons why I didn't mention the name of Nicole's boyfriend is... I don't know who Kibum might like beside Jjong xD I don't even consider an option where Key likes someone else *is totally Jongkey biased

[onhoing]

sob i love your jinki ;_; he's so cool *-*
lol and poor minho! i winced while reading the part where he was being beaten up OTL

ah, i'm so curious about what happens next! :o
anw, thanks for the update bb! ♥

[minewsadvocate]

I'm reaaaally sorry for my late reply :/ I've had a bad period lately.. you follow me on twitter and you probably have noticed my depressing tweets sigh :( I'm sorry about that too^^

I hope the beating part was enough... raw xD If it made you wince then I probably succeeded? haha I hope so, I was wincing too while writing it

Thanks for your comment ♥♥

[onhoing]

nah, it's okay bb~ you don't have to apologize :) i love seeing you on my timeline, be it a depressed tweet or a happy/spazzy ones!♥

[yaoi_kpop_gurl]

Ahhhh you updated!
I'm kinda new to lj so I was wondering what spot meant? Is it a way for people to know you have updated? If so, could I have a spot please? :D
Off to read the second ch ^^

[minewsadvocate]

Ah no, it's not really a way for people to get updated...
it's a way to reserve a comment.. like if I spot your username you can use the 'reply' under my comment to make your comment to appear in the first positions^^

I hope my explanation wasn't too confusing xD

[yaoi_kpop_gurl]

ahhh okay that makes sense! ^^ thank you for clearing that up :D

[yaoi_kpop_gurl]

I love jinki. I love how he is saving minho and helping him even though it is only his job. I am wondering what kind of job he does though... And how he got that degree even though never stepping foot in the school lol. The beat up scene was written well and this fic as I have said before is so amazing and interesting

[minewsadvocate]

I am utterly happy you love Jinki *___* cause I love him to death too <3
yeah I'll explain about his job later, so don't worry^^

Thank you, the beating scene looks a bit awkward to me at first, but I'm glad you like it^^

Thank you for your comment~

[yaoi_kpop_gurl]

you're welcome! YAY another MVP!! :D i cannot wait for the update :D

[reallystorygirl]

Eccoci al secondo capitolo! *__

[minewsadvocate]

Quella gif di Kibum. Oddio le cose che mi fa venire in mente. XD La prossima volta avvisami prima di postare queste gif