{five} Sin S(e)oul

[minewsadvocate]

title: Sin S(e)oul
word count: 2963w
pairing: Onho, Jongkey
genre: crime, drama, action, romance
overall rating: NC-17
warning: Presence of violence, (consensual and not) sex, prostitution, gambling and mafia activities in general
summary: What happens when you become part of a powerful organization that could make you feel alive as much as dead? And

Comments

[reallystorygirl]

Mi scuso anche qui per il ritardo ç_ç, mi dispiace davvero tanto non avere ancora commentato

[ryukilla]

Kyuhyun è in realtà un personaggio chiave o.o cioè lui sta in mezzo ovunque xD si vede che è lui dei Suju che mi piace :P Mah in realtà lui è tanto amico degli SHINee quindi ho pensato di usare lui come amico di tutti xD

Concordo, Jessica deve morire.

La scena di Minho… oddio mi fa ancora venire i brividi se ci penso. Ho faticato molto per scriverla, perché dovevo descrivere Heechul massacrato per terra… e il sangue e… sigh

La scena di Kyu e Jinki nella macchina è abbastanza confusa, ma non è una scena importante e sono troppo pigra per spigarla meglio xD quello che importa è che Jonghyun esce dalla prigione.

Commmmmmunque, è successo tanto da questo capitolo vero?? Oddio adesso sto scrivendo il capitolo 10 *___* (e tu sai cosa vuol dire no??) :p

[such_a_sadsound]

kx'hlvsyklfhskjflwiutfwieugf,sdg I CAN'T THINK OF ANYTHING TO SAY RIGHT NOW. JFC THIS STORY IS AMAZING. ;LDJFSLYFSIGFTUSIGF.UKSTFGFKUT

I have such a soft spot for Mobster movies, or just anything related to the Mafia, and Jinki as a cold successor is just BRILLIANT. please tell me he's the successor to his dads family because i don't know what i'll do if he isn't ;;I love him so much, his character is so pleasing to read. Oh gosh I just want to know everything about him, I want to know if he's been trained since he was little i just wANT TO KNOW EVEERRRYTHING AND I MEAN EVERYTHING ABOUT HIM OMFG IT'S RIDICULOUS, HONESTLY. Christ and I love how Kyu looks up to Jinki. Oh god that's so slkfhfd;utskutllkstfgt. That scene though, in the third chapter I think, where Jinki's in the car and they kill one of the guys beating up Minho. I just can't with that scene okay. He's so badass, and calm and he's so professional /dead/ I love the fact that Jinki doesn't like Minho, and he doesn't know why his father wants him in the organization, and i

[minewsadvocate]

LOL I love how you said you couldn't think of anything to say and you wrote a freaking huge comment *______________* (I can't imagine what you'd write if you had something to say :P

[such_a_sadsound]

OTL I know, I bet I would have written a full on 5 paged essay. >.<

wahhhh i'm jelly that the Mafia is a part of your history. :p hahahaha that's the only thing that's a downside with the Mafia, that and all the betrayal that goes on in the families. ;~;

Mafia!Jinki is the best ever, but only this type. Do you know what I mean? This Jinki, because i've read a few other Mafia!Shinee fics but they always make Jinki kind of innocent, and lost at first who then turns into a cold blooded killer, don't get me wrong I love those Jinki's too, but JFC ruthless successor Jinki is by far the best. Omfg he is perfect. You deserve all these awards for creating your Jinki. and I swear i'm not saying that because i'm so Jinki biased. I just want to wrap Kibum in a blanket and tell him everything is going to be fine. T^T i always say that i hate angst, but i actually love angst so much it's like become apart of me bff!Jongho is the one of the best things ever. I always feel like that pairing is more like best friends. they'er my brotp lol :p