{prologue} Sin S(e)oul

[minewsadvocate]

title: Sin S(e)oul
word count: 1351w
pairing: Onho, Jongkey
genre: crime, drama, action, romance
overall rating: NC-17
warning: Presence of violence, (consensual and not) sex, prostitution, gambling and mafia activities in general
summary: What happens when you become part of a powerful organization that could make you feel alive as much as dead? And

Comments

[hitoshisakurai]

-SPOT- needs to eat breakfast and get out the bed in general
My two OTPs and my favourite themes in one fic... I can tell it's gonna be fun to read!
/brb to comment~

[minewsadvocate]

we have a lot in common then :P
thank you for spotting ;___; *hugs*

[hitoshisakurai]

Okay, so I've been a lazy ass yesterday. Or not really, just the thought of getting my finals' results this Friday paralyzed me. OTL

I HAVE SO MANY THINGS TO SAY
First one: as I mentioned before, when I saw you published this fic and I read the summary, genre and stuff I was like 'OH HOLY SHIT'. Because, well, JongKey is my otp and I've been craving some good fic about them with some original plot, OnHo is my second otp and I rarely get to read any fics about them, AND, it contains prostitution and mafia and omg I love you /sounds like a creep
Also, the fact that Key is the hooker here gives me sooooo many emotions, gosh, I can't calm down >< you know I myself have written a fic (now I'm doing the sequel) where he is one, and he's also a dancer in a gay bar, so it's a really amazing thing to read, another approach to the subject to take in *__* you described him marvelously. Like, the whole prologue is rather short, but I can already tell some things, like, Jjong was the one that Key loved and somehow he left him and Key became a

[hitoshisakurai]

also, you might think I'm a real creep, but rn I've been looking for the first chapter thinking 'gosh, I remember I saw it and she left a spot for me', and realized that, well, I only had a dream about it *dead*... unless you deleted it o_O but I'll go for the first one><
Anyways, I really can't wait to read more!!!!!! <33

[seungjiyeon]

I really like the plot. The way you describe Kibum's world, the way he is on stage and everything. This fic is going to be reaaly amazing, I feel it.

[minewsadvocate]

Thank you very much for your lovely comment!
This prologue was a challenge against myself, it's been months since I had wanted to try and write it and I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[chevalierlee]

you gave me pervert thought ...
kibum + strip tease = porn (naughty kibum just pop-up from nowhere)

I love it ...
but I just don't know how to give u good comment ;___;

[minewsadvocate]

bb ;____; it doesn't matter if your comment is good or bad, I'm so happy you commented!!
and no, this comment is so good <3 because you know how much I'm obsessed with slut!Kibum XD

THANK YOU FOR COMMENTING /hugs/

[chevalierlee]

/hugs/
of course I know that! :P
well .. slut!kibum stuck in my head /blame it on u :P

[minewsadvocate]

LOL yessss blame it on me~
I doesn't care cause slut!kibum needs love~ xD

/HUGH BACK/