Take Me For A Walk In The Morning Dew - The First Trimester (part 2/2)

[minhosflower]

Pairing: OnHo
Rating: Idk, somewhere between pg and nc-17 
Warnings: Cursing, male pregnancy

Comments

Minho's pregnant belly started!!!!

[dubusangtae14]

Lol, I had to read the explanation repeatedly cause I'm not really good in science stuff~but I must say, it's a pretty convincing explanation :D you really sounded like a doctor. I laughed when Onew said "he has cancer?!" it's quite funny since I thought he has no basis (again, I don't have enough intelligence about science...) then again, he's smart and it's quite possible~ I'm really frowning while reading the first weeks of when they found out that he's pregnant because Minho's being depressed and he shuts down his surrounding. For a moment, I thought that he's mad at Onew. Totally relieved when Key came in and make him snap back to reality!! Almighty Self-proclaiming Uncle Kibum to the rescue

Re: Minho's pregnant belly started!!!!

[minhosflower]

The cancer thing is based on science so Onew was being really smart. A trace of that hormone in somebody who isn't pregnant can be a sign of cancer.
And that explanation is what I spent two days researching for and making up a theory. Sorry if it's too scientific, I just didn't want to throw in some completely unbelievable and stupid explanation.

The touching the belly moment is like my second favorite. The one that makes me tear up is where Onew is trying to calm Minho down in the car.

[minhosflower]

My warnings need to be taken seriously lmao :D They're so cute tho I could puke rainbows.

Sorry about making you sad, I didn't mean to hurt anyone's feelings. I'm glad you're super lucky tho.

[minhosflower]

Added the family problems to give the story some depth. Didn't want it to be too many rainbows.

Ah, I really need all the luck in the world during the next two weeks. I wish the exam was on SHINee pairings and otps bcz I'd ace it but unfortunately it's not and I'll totally fail.

[sweatnitemare]

OMG! There's A LOT to anticipate from this and I really hate pestering and ushering people but you can't aboslutely can't not update this fic for more than a week! XD

Oh every part of this 2nd half of Ch1 gives me goosebumps. The crying in the car scene, the cold shoulders, the apology. Everything!

Little OnHo will be so cute! Big round eyes like mommy Min and a beautiful smile like daddy On. Aigoooo~

Thank you thank you thank you!
Ps: reading this chapter again tmr kekeke.

[minhosflower]

I really wish I could update sooner. I'll do my best!

Omg "little Onho" made me laugh so hard. The baby has a nickname now!

Thank you for your comments! They're both cute :D

[seungjiyeon]

I almost had a heart attack when I saw this on Minhonew...But then, I started to breath normally (I can't die before I read this chapter!) If I understand all this, Minho is now pregnant. (The baby is a girl! GOTTA BE A GIRL!) The scientific explanation are really convincing! (I'm not a scientist, but it sounded like it was written by a doctor) Why does Key and Onew are not friends, or at least gentle toward one toward another (does this sentence make sense?) I don't like Key...He's too...not gentle toward Onew. I'm happy to see that Minho finally spoke to Onew.

Update soon! (That's what happens when you write a good story, with a great plot, and everything)

[minhosflower]

It probably sounded like it was written by a doctor because I've been spending hours upon hours on google, learning about pregnancies and all the things that come with it like hormones, trimesters and how the baby develops, etc.
If my mom saw my safari history it would be hard to convince her I'm NOT pregnant >_<

The sentence made sense, but I don't know why they can't get along. It kind of just happened that way when I started writing.
Aww, don't dislike Key, tho, he's acctually nice. Give him a chance ^_^

And I'll try to update as soon as I can! Thank you!!

[icutkey]

this is good n great..love this pairing

pregnancy is really a hard and responsible task for young partner....i bet minho a bit scared of his pregnancy but believe that onew will take the rule to protect his boyfriend....i love this fir...hope you'll update soon..hahahhahaa

[minhosflower]

thank you! i'll try to update as soon as i can.

i think onho are probably the most responsible out of SHINee lol, so they'll take good care of each other and their little family