On dresses and unspoken rules

Jul 08, 2012 20:40

Pairing: Onho (Onew/Minjung)
Rating: NC-17

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fanfiction, minho, onew, onho, shinee

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sweatnitemare July 9 2012, 03:07:41 UTC
Awww Jinki! What a gentleman you are? If Minseok's find out you'll be fine. Who doesn't want you as their brother-in-law huh, you sweet little thing.

Minjung passed out! Really now? At least a thank you kiss. Effing squirting twice on Jinki's fingers. Hahahaha. Minjung's hot by the way. Her long legs are murderous.

Thank you for this. Smut in the morning is just my kind of breakfast. ^^

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minhosflower July 9 2012, 17:07:22 UTC
Thank you for this. Smut in the morning is just my kind of breakfast. ^^

love that line

i want minjung's long legs, they'd look hot in hot pants or a mini-skirt

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xdenisex July 9 2012, 05:50:01 UTC
mmmf
i definitely enjoyed this
and the fact that you didnt even use dirty talk but it was still hot i jsfdlnrwekngdgfd

also im positive that g-odalisque13 writes squirting!gwiboon dsklangkrnhtgc

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minhosflower July 9 2012, 17:28:05 UTC
i'm glad you enjoyed it

and thanks for the tip, now i know where to find some squirting fics :P

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squirter Minjung is good stuff dubusangtae14 July 9 2012, 09:27:49 UTC
I woke up at an ungodly hour and saw this~ omg, I am so turned on by this little oneshot!!!! =)))) But i was wondering why the evil works in progress was stil on top...maybe I overlooked this one when I visited yoyr journal earlier...This is hot, by the way! Even if it's just fingering...it's totally a turn on~ I've been deprived of Minjung/Onew nc17 fics lately and this is like a breath of fresh air :D

Get well soon!^^ Thanks for this wknderful read!

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Re: squirter Minjung is good stuff minhosflower July 9 2012, 16:57:35 UTC
the evil works in progress will forever be on top - check the post date, and no you didn't overlook, it's fresh out of my Microsoft word (can i put it like that?)

i wanna write more minjung/onew. it's a cute couple!!!

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poyiano July 9 2012, 19:18:02 UTC
Ahhh!~ I'm so happy you updated! I really missed your writing. This was sooo good omg. You're right, there needs to be more squirting fics. You did such a good job with this kink, if that's what you want to call it. Also, I love you feel better! :c

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minhosflower July 17 2012, 13:18:14 UTC
I'm glad you liked it :) Feeling so much better, thank you. Three weeks of antibiotics >_

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kailisweet July 15 2012, 22:39:39 UTC
YES! Onew gets more than chicken this time, even though he didn't even get off.

Hiding behind a plant, nice. Totally Onew :)

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minhosflower July 17 2012, 13:14:22 UTC
He almost got a hot chick instead of chicken, except she passed out.
He probably got off at home tho.

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