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miniscules

500 Days Of Louis (2/4)

Apr 15, 2012 10:57

Title: 500 Days Of Louis (2/4)
Rating: NC-17
Length:4, 137
Fandom: One Direction
Characters: Liam Payne, Zayn Malik, Louis Tomlinson, Harry Styles, Niall Horan,
Ships: Liam/Louis
Notes: This is basically just a 500 Days of Summer!au for louam.
Summary: This is a story of boy meets boy. But first off, you should know, this isn't a love story.
| part one |

( 500 days of Louis 2 of 4 )

pairing: louis/liam, length: 4000+ words, rating: nc-17, character: liam payne, character: harry styles, fandom: one direction, fic: 500 days of louis, character: louis tomlinson, character: zayn malik, character: niall horan

Comments 4

lermaggins April 15 2012, 16:53:29 UTC

That's really amazing, Val. sdhfjkshf Can't wait for the next part. <3333333333

wendies April 15 2012, 22:29:53 UTC

Thank you so much! Should be out tomorrow bb <333

jennifer_95 April 15 2012, 21:02:16 UTC

I really like this. It's so different and so good and I really want to watch the film you based this on now, the future bits if you know what I mean by that are so heart breaking, because I really feel Liam's pain :(( but then I have to keep thinking, the furthest it has gotten so far is in the ~earlyish 300s, so that's about 200 days for everything to work out!!

I think my two favourite days so far from the first two chapters have to be Day 34 and Day 109.

Day 34, because they seem so carefree and happy and Louis seems honestly surprised with Liam and the way he acts but he seems so happy about it, my favourite part of that day is this bit: "They collapsed on a bed next, roaring with laughter. Liam was lying atop of Louis gently, as not to crush him. They looked up to see a family staring at them in disgust as they slowly turned away, leaving Liam and Louis choking with laughter ( ... )

wendies April 15 2012, 22:33:11 UTC

UGH A DETAILED COMMENT GOD BLESS YOU. Oh my god you haven't sen 500 days of summer? WHAT ARE YOU DOING. Ughlakghaghkahklg pls. You must see it! It's so good!

oh my goodness thank you! I got those lines from the movie kind of. i kept some lines from the movie in the fic that i thought were important. including that one.

Oh my god thaaaaaaanki you lagkahgahkg ahhh!!!

Ugh yes! This is totally how I imagined it in my head tbh!

OH MY GOD PINING LIAM IS MY FAVORITE LIAM.

No but this is so amazing! Thank you so much omg! I'm not worthy of these kind words! Excpect part 3 tomorrow? i think! Ugh yes thank you so much ♥