Comments | minjungie: Newspapers, Jonghyun/Minho, pg 13

minjungie

Newspapers, Jonghyun/Minho, pg 13

Jan 23, 2012 01:39

So this is basically the first fic I've ever written, and it sort of seems rushed at some parts but I think its ok enough to read :)
( While the other kids brought special items for show and tell, Jonghyun bought the newspaper he found on his kitchen table, and read an article about a gruesome murder case to his grade 4 class until the teacher begged him to stop. )

pg:13, jonghyun/minho

Comments 9

shayvanwinkle January 23 2012, 22:44:54 UTC

I liked this story a lot! I'm a big fan of Minho as a girl as well, so there's that :D I liked how quiet and tough you made her, and the way Jonghyun thought about her in his head was really endearing. Thanks for posting ^^

minjungie January 24 2012, 00:54:18 UTC

thank you so much :)) I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading <3

jongbummie January 24 2012, 01:48:20 UTC

NAIMA THIS WAS SO GOOD AJRHODBFIEH I FUCKING CRIED AT THE PART WHERE JJONG WAS DAYDREAMING
and
I want a sequel where minjung comes back as minho and they fall in love and jjong realizes he's gay k?
ily<333

minjungie January 24 2012, 01:52:19 UTC

sob thanks so much babyy <333333 omg that is a great idea will write it after i finish this smut im working on lmao

mintyfresh1 January 24 2012, 02:24:35 UTC

hdu kill minjung D:<
HDU
haha i liked this, minjung and her dirty tennis shoes and being all weird<3
but...
BRING HER BACK
I DEMAND THAT THIS IS NOT THE END.
lmao i second a minho sequel

minjungie January 24 2012, 02:27:11 UTC

lmaoo im glad you liked it! and there shall be a sequel hopefully sob thanks for reading ;-;

linnhe January 24 2012, 12:20:58 UTC

This was so cute, I smiled at both their little quirks; Jonghyun and his ridiculous day dreams, and Minjeong's untidy shoes.

He notices that her usually untied shoelaces were tucked in today.

BUT THEN IT TURNS OUT SHE WAS DEAD ALL ALONG - way to break my heart D: /sobbing in a corner

but yeah, your jongho is flawless <3 I'm looking forward to reading more

minjungie January 24 2012, 17:10:32 UTC

sob thank you
and omg i love your userpic it made me laugh so hard lmao

vampy_candy February 22 2013, 15:20:32 UTC

So basically, Minjung was just a character in Jonghyun's imagination?? I didn't expect the ending would turn out like that, seriously. I felt pity at Jonghyun but at the same time I was terrified that he was talking alone at all those times.

I liked this. :)