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[mink141man]

The Flames of Choice

Just hold on, life's passing
Would be nice if we could have
Something to live for, a dream
Dreaming of you, and me
Together, like the old song goes
On, and on, barreling through life
Unawares, incomplete, totally unready
For the hell that awaits us - the fires
Of our own choosing.

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[emeraldeyes2008]

I'm commenting... lol, just like u said to. The one stipulation though is that... if I comment on your posts... you then must comment on mine, it's only fair!
The poem is great!! I really like it :) It is very true and realistic... but "for the hell that awaits us - the fires Of our own choosing." that part sort of scares me... idk. But still really good, keep um coming!!
See you tomorrow!!
-anne