My First Athrun x Cagalli fanfiction

[mink_toriumi]

Standard disclaimer: the author does not own Gundam Seed(Destiny) or any of its characters. Gundam Seed(Destiny) is the property of Bandai and Sunrise plus other people who I don't know the names of

Comments

[teaclovers]

So far the fanfic is a really cute idea. ^^ Cagalli was so cute being all nervous for her wedding, luckily Lacus and Kira were there! XD

Umm.. the only thing I'd like to point out that kinda well bothers me. (I hope I don't sound too offending, if I do I apologize greatly! *gomengomen*)
I just think, that Cagalli is a bit, out of character in the first bit... kinda abit too harsh/worried for her matureness that she developed in Destiny.
Either way, this fanfic seems very cute I hope to read more :D

^_^

[mink_toriumi]

Thank you for the compliment. And thank you for letting me know that Cagalli was out of character in the first bit. It helps a lot to know how not to write her when I think about how to write her in other stories.

This was just a one shot (which I should have probably noted somewhere.I am such a flake sometimes.Sorry!)but I am thinking of writing a Athrun x Cagalli story for my livejournal.

It's just whether or not I can get it on paper is the problem.>_<;;

Thank you again for the review. And the fanfiction suggestions. The one I read by your friend tsubameongaku was really cute and I am hoping to find more by her.

I hope you have a great day!

God bless!

Re: ^_^

[teaclovers]

^^ No problem... *heh*

hee-hee, I was wondering if you'd continue with what happend to them after the wedding.

Yeah I also love her stories, too. On livejournal, someone just posted alot of links to AsuCaga fanfics which you might also wana check out.