The Dichotomy Between Me and Me: Chapter 5

[minntaka]

Title: The Dichotomy Between Me and Me
Rating: M
Characters: Saïx, Xemnas, Marluxia, Xigbar, Axel, Larxene
Pairings: Xemnas/Saïx, Xemnas/Fem!Saïx, Marluxia/Saïx, Axel/Larxene
Summary: Saïx lives in two realities.  In one, he is an empty shell of a person - a Nobody - searching for his heart.  In another, she is a lonely housewife who, post-fugue, is

Comments

[ketsi_aiita_n]

WAAAAH NEW CHAPTER EXCITEMENT
I'm totally in love with Axel and Larxene. More than ever. Oh my god, how cute is he??

Also I'm really looking forward to seeing how all this plays out, I can't wait for the full moon to roll around, I'm very excited for this!

[minntaka]

Haha, thanks ♥ I have to admit, I get a bit liberal with Axel and Larxene in this, since they're only meant to be side characters. They're like my guilty pleasure in this XD so I'm glad you like them! I struggled a bit with this chapter, but I'm halfway with the next (it's that much easier to write) so it won't be long for an update, hopefully :)

[devils_pet]

Woman. Woman. Yes. Oh lord. That first part with the breakfast was so sweet and ickle, and then Marluxia. I mean. Yes. I know he's dangerous. You know he's dangerous. But Saix doesn't and that's scary. And she's so willing to talk to him, because she doesn't have to act like someone she doesn't remember. And he's such a charmer, who wouldn't wan to talk to him? You have no idea how excited I was when I saw this.

And Cannon!Xemnas, lol. He just gave up, but totally didn't admit that Saix was right.

Ugh, and the letters between the two Saix's! You know I love this story. It drives me crazy with unf.

[minntaka]

Thanks! Your comment on Marly was pretty much the image I wanted to set across for him - you know he's not a nice guy, but you can only watch Saix's misfortune unfold. (I sound a bit cruel :S )

Glad you like the story! I have too much fun writing it XD

[synchroshatter]

So. There I am, all like "Wow, things seem to be going surprisingly well, despite Saix being worried still. Getting on with Xemnas! Adorable children! Axel and Larxene being awesome still!"

And then, you know, Marluxia wanders in and the creepiness has shot up way past eleven. How do you manage this? Seriously. It's so horrible but weirdly compelling at the same time, because you just know it's going to go wrong, because, well, it's Marluxia. (Or maybe it'll go right? I'm not sure I believe him when he says they haven't met before.) Talk about car crash viewing.

Also, I'm not sure if I've said it before, but I love the Saix and baby!Xion interactions- they're all kind of heartbreaking, given what happens in Days. And the letters work really well too. I get the impression Organisation!Saix might be slightly jealous? Can't wait to find out more!

[minntaka]

Oh wow, I didn't know you were following this crackfic *_* I'm really glad to hear you're enjoying it, though! I get a bit liberal with this one because it's an AU - I'm not quite disciplined enough to write it without going OOC in the first draft (and consequently shredding said draft and trying again).

I have too much fun writing Marluxia - he will always be Mr Creepy Suave Psychopath to me, and even in an AU, I can't imagine him in you know...a positive light of sorts. He freaks me out in general XD

Haha yeah, I'm aiming for a bit of irony there with Saix and baby Xion. I was originally going to make Xion the only child of the family, but plot bunnies insisted on a brood, so she's the only girl instead ^_^ I'm planning to thin out the letters pretty soon - I have to admit that letters, diary entries and flashbacks just sound like cheese when I write it. Thanks very much for reading and leaving a comment! :)

[bootihore]

excellent articles, useful for me. keep writing and happy blogging.