Monochrome Chât - Chapter 1

[minntaka]

Title: Monochrome Chât

Fandom: Kingdom Hearts

Pairings: Lea/Isa

Genre: Drama, Romance

Rating: T

Summary: [AU][AkuSai] As part of a pact, Lea moves to the village of Silverkey. He gets a job and a house, and the villagers collectively believe even an ex-convict can turn his life around. With things this perfect, it seems fair that the only spanner in the

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[water_foxx]

Oh my. I saw on tumblr the other night that there was a new fic in the works, but never had I expected something like this!

Long story short, I loves it. It almost makes me sorry for Liam, having to live with such a meanie XD

Can't wait to read more c:

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[minntaka]

hehehe it's quite a different tone to BoC isn't it? :) I'm glad you like it so far, and Arlene especially - she's pretty fun to write! Thanks for reading and for your support! :)

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[water_foxx]

It is, but I'm surprised how much I enjoyed it! (That sounded bad but it IS a compliment XD)

I'm definitely looking forward to more...

It's good you enjoy writing the characters; it really sucks when one POV just doesn't work out, or one of them keeps giving you the finger when you just want them to do ONE THING... ehehe.

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[minntaka]

haha that's cool i understand - i mean, even i was a bit surprised at how quickly the idea formed and how much i liked writing it, even if the concept is a bit out there (but all my fics are, i guess!)

ugh i know, tell me about it! this fic's been really good so far, but boc's saix is so damn impossible to write sometimes XD

[synchroshatter]

So...how many mysteries did you want to set up in this chapter?? You can’t just leave us hanging like that! ‘Who what when where why how’ might just about cover it, I guess!

Naminé the ladybird! That’s just adorable! Kind of suspicious of Liam and Arlene as her parents though, as caring as they initially seem. (And you, Xemnas, don’t think I don’t see you with your Terra appearance and your Organisation name!)

Convenient that the old mayor just ‘died’ though. Why do I get the feeling that’s only half the story...?

Really enjoyed it- there’s more soon, right? *hopeful eyes*

[minntaka]

Hahaha it's the first chapter - I had to set it off with a bang! :) Thanks for giving this fic a go - it's completely out of my comfort zone but I'm having so much fun with it.

Good spot with Xemnas, by the way - I grinned when I read your comment because it was a single word that implied it and I was wondering if anyone would pick up on it. I guess nothing escapes you!!

Thanks again - I'm working hard on the second chapter so hopefully there'll be an update soon ^_^

[synchroshatter]

Haha, I admit I had to do a double take there. I'm on to you, Mr Not-Exactly-Xemnas-or-Terra...or so I think, but probably my almost theory would end up completely wrong, so I'm going to stick with 'intrigued' as far as he's concerned!

Good luck with the rest! It's good you're giving something a go that you don't find so easy- if the rest turns out as well as this chapter I'd say you're doing a great job. :)

[minntaka]

haha well in any case, great spot :) i love putting in tidbits like that - i get all gleeful because i've actually planned a story out and so i get to do stuff like this when normally the foreshadowing/clues would just kinda fall flat XD

thank you! i think it's the lack of angst that's surpising me, haha - i feel like a rabbit seeing the sun for the first time or something ^///^

[cheerubi]

damn. i did NOT expect that.
this is definitely gonna be an epic story, i can tell ;w;
i just hope this get updated soon heheh, you're killing me with suspense <3

[minntaka]

Haha thanks! (Am assuming you're talking about the ending! I had originally wrote it in the summary but took it out because I thought it'd ruin the surprise :) )

Thanks for your comment and support! I'm hoping to update soon :D

[cheerubi]

the surprise is the best part hahah <3
really really loved it, it was genius :D
looking forward to it ~<3

[minntaka]

aaah thank you!! <3 i hope to update soon :)