Comments | minorheartbeat: anyday

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anyday

Apr 03, 2009 13:09

anyday
jaejoong/changmin
anyband verse. for linda, & this was the prompt. sorry this is so late and i tried to do jaechun but it didn't work out. :( ps. thank you for helping me with this, cheska.

( One day, when Changmin wakes up, the world no longer has colour. )

fandom: anyband, pairing: jaejoong/changmin, fandom: dbsk

Comments 29

engraved_16 April 4 2009, 07:28:06 UTC

WOW
i loved TT^TT it was ery intriguing ^-^

thanks for sharing

firelights April 4 2009, 19:17:47 UTC

thank you~ (:

dream_hunt April 4 2009, 20:12:21 UTC

Can't find the words to describe what I'm feeling, so just ♥ and THANK YOU

firelights April 4 2009, 20:28:54 UTC

aslfk thank you! i've never gotten red hearts or colourful font before. :)))) ♥

dream_hunt April 4 2009, 20:56:04 UTC

*blush* this was my first colourful time too *blush*
♥♥ I love your userpic!!! ♥♥

hollyhockyuu April 5 2009, 03:37:51 UTC

BRB to see the anycall video... cause this was just awesome and I need to see the video again and again now >_<

(I love the Jaemin ♥)

firelights April 5 2009, 06:37:43 UTC

hahaha, thank you! ♥

jaeminnie April 5 2009, 22:54:56 UTC

This is one of the best AnyBand fics I have ever read, and not only because my favorite OTP is in it. I love your writing.

firelights April 5 2009, 22:57:22 UTC

thank you so much. it's very nice to hear that. :)

sleepish April 7 2009, 15:11:17 UTC

FINALLY READING THIS. omg anyband. :( first of all i love the set-up, the idea of an 'accident'. and just the way you use color throughout the entire fic.

Once, he tries smiling while he stares at the glass, pulling up his cheeks with his fingers and seeing what it looks like, but it feels almost as wrong as everything else does and he stops.

i really like this part despite how SAD it makes me. changmin should always be able to smile his weird mismatched eyes smile. :( also sobbing the beatles. navneet you know the way to my heart.

"no, but I'd like to get to know you again."

this. :(

i love 7 and how succinct it is. and then 8, with the little details about each of them.

Jaejoong's voice is getting louder the more he speaks, and for an instant, Changmin sees the blond hair, the bright eyes, superimposed over the quieter Jaejoong. Then Jaejoong deflates and the image disappears because they're both remembering the empty faces of the people who live in the city, their hollow eyes and their thin hands. Death always takes more ( ... )

uses random jaechun icon firelights April 7 2009, 16:03:36 UTC

crying linda you know the way to my heart too. :((( ♥