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Feb 06, 2011 20:35

déjà vu
shinee au, approx. 3500w.
jonghyun/jinki

I can’t believe I wrote SHINee fic. Epic SHINee fic for me, jfc. ANYWAY this is for pixeltoy aka one of my favourite old people. Happy birthday, Serena!! ♥ I’m sorry this is late, but I hope you like it. :) This is vaguely inspired by Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind (or so I realized after writing it ( Read more... )

pairing: jonghyun/jinki, fandom: shinee

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kantamu February 7 2011, 05:02:14 UTC

AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH okay.

I'm so tired and incoheren't right now but even through that I feel like this is so beautiful and pretty and bawwww the end gives me cute little fluffly feelings. And I loved the way it progressed and the pace and yeah. I liked it ♥

symphonied February 7 2011, 21:01:12 UTC

lasfksa yay! I'm so happy you liked it :> I was kinda nervous because I've never written for shinee before. anyway, thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

volatileflame February 7 2011, 05:07:04 UTC

this was so beautiful <3

symphonied February 7 2011, 21:01:41 UTC

I'm glad you think so! :) thank you~ ♥

nocturnes February 7 2011, 05:12:30 UTC

Ahh you know, now that you say that in your notes, I definitely see it. I need to rewatch that movie. So lovely. ♥

Like I said before, I love the pacing in this, soft, slow and sure. I really loved the kiss at the end--how it's chapped and therefore a little imperfect but also so lovely. There is something wonderful about light falling, too.

Basically sobs I love your writing but you already know this. ♥

symphonied February 7 2011, 21:03:05 UTC

yeahhhh, I was just reading it over and was like O_O when I noticed lolol. I thought I should mention it. :) it really was. ♥

aslkf thank you, emily. I'm really glad you liked it, and your comments are always so wonderful. :"> I love light falling, too.

♥♥♥

onew February 7 2011, 05:27:21 UTC

BRB READING THIS LIKE IT'S THE LAST DAY OF MY LIFE.

symphonied February 7 2011, 21:07:24 UTC

ahaha aklsf I hope you liked it! :)

childishgrin February 7 2011, 06:50:22 UTC

I still remember watching Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind and wondering why reviews made it seem like such a confusing movie. It was certainly a quirky, sometimes vague, somewhat off the wall and maybe a bit... foggy movie but I know I was intrigued by it and did rather enjoy it.

And I did enjoy reading this fic too. :)

symphonied February 7 2011, 21:08:02 UTC

yes, it was exactly that. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it! thanks for reading~ ♥