entwined

Dec 15, 2008 21:57

entwined
Jaejoong/Changmin
The second time they meet, they're swept off their feet and they don't even realize it.

For mrsedjack.

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the first time is insignificant. )

fic: old, pairing: jaejoong/changmin, fandom: dbsk

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smakn December 16 2008, 22:31:44 UTC
It's amusing that Changmin can't cook when he is the one who tries to force Jaejoong into eating better...

(I guess he forced Jaejoong to cook. Or threatened him with Changmin's cooking...XD)



I give strangers my umbrella ALL THE TIME. D<

Ok, maybe not always, but when I think it's needed.

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amorbuffer January 15 2013, 02:09:48 UTC
I couldn't leave this page without telling you that I simply adored this piece. It was beautiful, mesmerising and you created an atmosphere that I can't quite describe except that it was exquisite. What I really loved is somehow you created such a sense of space in this story...I wish I knew how to put it...give me a little space let me see if I can work it out >////< By space I mean the rhythm. Nothing felt rushed. Everything felt right. Like it was how it went. There was nothing unnecessary, not extra words, no extra moments just the ones that counted for us to know about, the rest is between them ( ... )

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firelights January 17 2013, 05:19:18 UTC
aww, thank you, this is very kind. i'm so glad you enjoyed it! ♥

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