ohmygoodness this was amazing. i loved this so much you dont even know how much i loved this rfjskntg and kris omfg he was my favorite, hes adorable as frick. i loved teacher kyungsoo too, with his knitting and cardigans, and bad ass pole dancing. actually i loved ALL THE CHRACTERS CRIES but the ending did seem kinda rushed? it would have been really nice to hear minseoks side of the story... since when did he start liking kris? i was waiting for minseok to admit he liked him a little too when they were little? or to at least say he liked him back. ah okay i seee. i looked though the comments and saw your replies saying the ending got deleted? and thats why it was so rushed, aah~
I have a lot of anger with this fic tbh mainly because the final product is not 100% what I wanted to put out (an entire important flashback sequence of minseok coming out to him didn't get posted here for some reason) and then the rushed ending didn't give me a chance to flesh Minseok out. I did add a bit more to the confession in the vers on my journal.
Kris laughs. “God Min, I’ve been in love with you since the ninth grade."
“Idiot.” Minseok shakes his head the gesture at odds with the almost giddy expression on his face. “You never said anything.”
“I didn’t know it was mutual.”
“And I repeat-idiot. God Kris, I was never subtle about it. Even now. Do you think I climb into bed with all my sick friends?"
Kris tips his head upwards, meeting Minseok's gaze. "So, be more blatant this time.
so yeah. But again, thank you for reading and commenting
Omg this is such a lovely comment, thank you so much. I really wanted to avoid making my characters overly-feminine because with a concept like a burlesque au, thats always something that could occur. OMG, I burst into laughter when I saw Suho cross-dressing irl because I DID IT FIRST HAHAHA.
I'm honorued that you'd consider re-reading it. If you do, I'd reccomend you do the version on my journal because it has the scenes that were missin from this one
I waited until after reveals so I wouldn't reveal you
Okay this turned out even more fabulous than expected...you know I was skeptical of the burlesque elements from the first draft and the summary but you made me a believer
YES...and could you imagine how awful it's been for Minseok too with believing Kris was straight, when he's actually bi, and all his avoidance tactics.
Straight up getting his secretary to lie so Kris will come to the studio after avoiding him for two weeks...Minseokie...
I also reread it on your journal and those parts should be here!
OMG, you read it twice? I'm honoured Unnie. Ugh I wish I cold resend this but the mods would kill me considering all the trouble I put them through. Minseok doesn't play around lol.
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It was brilliant and really fun to read!
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I'm very proud of the names negl
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but the ending did seem kinda rushed? it would have been really nice to hear minseoks side of the story... since when did he start liking kris? i was waiting for minseok to admit he liked him a little too when they were little? or to at least say he liked him back. ah okay i seee. i looked though the comments and saw your replies saying the ending got deleted? and thats why it was so rushed, aah~
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I have a lot of anger with this fic tbh mainly because the final product is not 100% what I wanted to put out (an entire important flashback sequence of minseok coming out to him didn't get posted here for some reason) and then the rushed ending didn't give me a chance to flesh Minseok out. I did add a bit more to the confession in the vers on my journal.
Kris laughs. “God Min, I’ve been in love with you since the ninth grade."
“Idiot.” Minseok shakes his head the gesture at odds with the almost giddy expression on his face. “You never said anything.”
“I didn’t know it was mutual.”
“And I repeat-idiot. God Kris, I was never subtle about it. Even now. Do you think I climb into bed with all my sick friends?"
Kris tips his head upwards, meeting Minseok's gaze. "So, be more blatant this time.
so yeah. But again, thank you for reading and commenting
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I really wanted to avoid making my characters overly-feminine because with a concept like a burlesque au, thats always something that could occur.
OMG, I burst into laughter when I saw Suho cross-dressing irl because I DID IT FIRST HAHAHA.
I'm honorued that you'd consider re-reading it. If you do, I'd reccomend you do the version on my journal because it has the scenes that were missin from this one
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Okay this turned out even more fabulous than expected...you know I was skeptical of the burlesque elements from the first draft and the summary but you made me a believer
YES...and could you imagine how awful it's been for Minseok too with believing Kris was straight, when he's actually bi, and all his avoidance tactics.
Straight up getting his secretary to lie so Kris will come to the studio after avoiding him for two weeks...Minseokie...
I also reread it on your journal and those parts should be here!
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Ugh I wish I cold resend this but the mods would kill me considering all the trouble I put them through.
Minseok doesn't play around lol.
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