Comments | minsgunshot: I Can't Hear You

minsgunshot

I Can't Hear You

Aug 08, 2012 01:00

Title: I Can't Hear You
Fandom: B1A4
Pairing: Baro/Jinyoung
Rating: G
Word Count: A clean 2000
Summary: The rain makes a couple sprout-dols restless.

( He didn’t hate the storm itself. He hated how alone he felt because of it. )

jinyoung, fanfic, b1a4, rating: g, baro, pairing: baro/jinyoung

Comments 7

judysaurus August 8 2012, 15:33:22 UTC

This was really, really cute omg! It was a nice, quiet read and I enjoyed it :3

I like how you wrote Baro and made him a little shy. The image of him walking like a penguin in the beginning was really cute too ^^ And Jinyoung trying to hide his smile at the end wahhh how adorable ;u; I hope you write more for B1A4!

minsgunshot August 8 2012, 21:03:34 UTC

Hehe, truthfully I've always had a weakness for Shy!Baro ;3; Thank you so much for reading! ^^ I'm glad you liked it.

nicolochy August 10 2012, 17:27:34 UTC

Aww it was sweet! Jinyoung was giggling in triumph that he got to set Sunwoo up to sing him a lullaby and be his pillow! "Only One" was very fitting for him at that scene with his worries and all. And it does pretty well as a lullaby too.

minsgunshot August 10 2012, 17:42:15 UTC

I'm glad it fit so well, I was going through the same process as Baro to find a song to fit the scene ^-^ Thank you for reading <3

blackheart_lies August 25 2012, 17:10:14 UTC

beautiful <3

minsgunshot August 25 2012, 17:32:27 UTC

Aw, thank you <3 and thanks for reading ^^

kimhalmae December 11 2012, 18:31:15 UTC

I- WHA- ;A; OMG HALP THIS IS SO CUTE AL;SIDHFA;LHFA;LDHFAL;IH T__T

I want to point out which parts are cute but all oF THEM ARE PRETTY FRIGGIN' CUTE AND I CAN'T REALLY CHOOSE. CRIES. I especially loved the bit of Sunwoo trying to choose a song to sing though. ;~; SO CUTE. I love how they both basically need each other to sleep? Like, I know Jinyoung couldn't sleep because he couldn't hear any of the members but how one of his reasons why was because Sunwoo didn't say good night. ;~; And Sunwoo not being able to go back to sleep after finding out Jinyoung wasn't there... nO SHUT UP JUST LET ME BE AND ENJOY MY OTP IN PEACE!!!11!

Ugh, sorry. I'm a bit of a mess when leaving comments because my feels get in the way of trying to be a civil person. :'( CRIES. They're my B1A4 OTP so. ;-; I LOVE THEM SO MUCH. /SOBS

Anyways. I really loved this! THANK YOU FOR THIS! I hope you write more OF THESE TWO!!1! in the future! ;u;