Why apologise for the ending? I love it. It makes sense and it *struggles with words* .. what i mean is, it is the ending for what it is. And what it is, is something i like very much.
Look at you and your awesome skills for writing :D
Aww, you're so nice T^T That ending... I sort of felt that it fit, but it was weird because it was, like, the result of my train of thought coming to a screeching halt XD But thank you for reading and the incredibly kind words ;3;
THE ENDNG IS PERFECT OKAY? I really really really really.. (...) .. really really realy loved it. They were so cute okay. YOU KNOW, you should write a sequel about this story ;A; I want them to love eachother and lsdkfls ;A; okay, so yeah, that was so precious, and I really like how you put cute personnality to the 2 of them :3
Ah, that ending >.< and a sequel, I'm not too sure about darlin' XD because I'm really not experienced with the straightforward romance I think you're going for... Anyway, thank you so much for reading and commenting, you are seriously the sweetest thing ;3;
You should still try. You know, I'm also trying to write. Usually I write in French (French is my first languuage) but I still try to write in english even if I'm not very good. It's a challenge like another. I didn't say I want to read a smut you wrote. I just want a story, a love story, that's what I want to read. I know you can do it. Just trust yourself and write~
Ahhh, your first language is French? I'm taking high school French, and it's great. That's so cool, I'm jealous of your... bilingualism haha. OH FOR SURE I COULD NEVER EVER EVER NEVER write smut I'm sorry but I could never XD But you're right, I adore love stories so I should probably try some of my own, because I feel like I just hint at romance >_< so maybe... I'll write a romance like that sometime in the future? If I find the right inspiration ^^ Thanks for the support, love <3
Actually I like the ending~ hehehe. Even with the small amount of dialogues you are able to show the feelings. What am I talking about? :)) And 2Hyun's so adorable too. Believe me, the ending made me smile. Everything is perfect the way it is. ^^
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Usually I write in French (French is my first languuage) but I still try to write in english even if I'm not very good.
It's a challenge like another. I didn't say I want to read a smut you wrote.
I just want a story, a love story, that's what I want to read.
I know you can do it. Just trust yourself and write~
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