A Point of View

Aug 26, 2012 03:11

Title: A Point of View
Fandom: NU'EST
Pairing: JR/Minhyun
Rating: G
Word Count:1765
Summary: The progression of Minhyun's rapper and JR's vocalist.

It would make his heart feel light and heavy at the same time, empty of worries but full from the satisfaction given by the fact that somebody cared. )

pairing: jr/minhyun, fanfic, minhyun, rating: g, nu'est, jr

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blackheart_lies August 26 2012, 20:23:12 UTC
Why apologise for the ending? I love it. It makes sense and it *struggles with words* .. what i mean is, it is the ending for what it is. And what it is, is something i like very much.

Look at you and your awesome skills for writing :D

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minsgunshot August 26 2012, 22:40:49 UTC
Aww, you're so nice T^T That ending... I sort of felt that it fit, but it was weird because it was, like, the result of my train of thought coming to a screeching halt XD But thank you for reading and the incredibly kind words ;3;

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luster_stardust August 27 2012, 20:29:28 UTC
THE ENDNG IS PERFECT OKAY? I really really really really.. (...) .. really really realy loved it. They were so cute okay. YOU KNOW, you should write a sequel about this story ;A; I want them to love eachother and lsdkfls ;A; okay, so yeah, that was so precious, and I really like how you put cute personnality to the 2 of them :3

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minsgunshot August 28 2012, 00:03:11 UTC
Ah, that ending >.< and a sequel, I'm not too sure about darlin' XD because I'm really not experienced with the straightforward romance I think you're going for... Anyway, thank you so much for reading and commenting, you are seriously the sweetest thing ;3;

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luster_stardust August 28 2012, 22:01:13 UTC
You should still try. You know, I'm also trying to write.
Usually I write in French (French is my first languuage) but I still try to write in english even if I'm not very good.
It's a challenge like another. I didn't say I want to read a smut you wrote.
I just want a story, a love story, that's what I want to read.
I know you can do it. Just trust yourself and write~

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minsgunshot August 28 2012, 23:20:47 UTC
Ahhh, your first language is French? I'm taking high school French, and it's great. That's so cool, I'm jealous of your... bilingualism haha. OH FOR SURE I COULD NEVER EVER EVER NEVER write smut I'm sorry but I could never XD But you're right, I adore love stories so I should probably try some of my own, because I feel like I just hint at romance >_< so maybe... I'll write a romance like that sometime in the future? If I find the right inspiration ^^ Thanks for the support, love <3

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heechachul18 August 29 2012, 19:36:33 UTC
Actually I like the ending~ hehehe. Even with the small amount of dialogues you are able to show the feelings. What am I talking about? :)) And 2Hyun's so adorable too. Believe me, the ending made me smile. Everything is perfect the way it is. ^^

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minsgunshot August 30 2012, 00:32:40 UTC
Teehee thanks the thing with the bits of dialogue was actually my favorite part of this XD Thanks so much for reading, sweet pea ^3^

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