Wahh, this was a great fic! I loved how you described them throughout the story, I felt like their emotions were expressed well through your metaphors.
" It practically bounced off Dongwoo’s tongue as he repeated it, and saying his own name in comparison was like drinking flat soda."
I love that line in particular because it reveals so much about the two in just so little words :3
"He could be a clown or a little kid or an angel. But apparently he was only Dongwoo’s clown, Dongwoo’s kid, Dongwoo’s angel. No one else’s."
I also really loved that line because uGH IT GIVES ME FEELINGS ;______; How there's so much more to Sandeul that no one sees, except CNU ;n;
The quiet sort of way you wrote this fits well with the story, and I wish you luck with the rest of your prompts :3 Thank you for writing!
Agh but your comments give ME FEELINGS ;A; I'm really glad you liked this, and that you thought things fit pretty nicely :3 ok I wasn't going to say anything but I'm just really happy that you pointed out specific things because they stood out to you IDK MAN WHENEVER THAT HAPPENS I JUST GET REALLY EXCITED SO THANKS LOL
haha no problem! I love quoting my fav parts of people's fic and to be honest I could quote a lot from this because I thought many parts of it were lovely :3 wheeee I hope you write more for b1a4 someday ^^
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" It practically bounced off Dongwoo’s tongue as he repeated it, and saying his own name in comparison was like drinking flat soda."
I love that line in particular because it reveals so much about the two in just so little words :3
"He could be a clown or a little kid or an angel. But apparently he was only Dongwoo’s clown, Dongwoo’s kid, Dongwoo’s angel. No one else’s."
I also really loved that line because uGH IT GIVES ME FEELINGS ;______; How there's so much more to Sandeul that no one sees, except CNU ;n;
The quiet sort of way you wrote this fits well with the story, and I wish you luck with the rest of your prompts :3 Thank you for writing!
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OTL... and thank you so much for reading <3
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Though I loved the flat soda analogy! That immediately gave me the exact feeling you were going for.
Thanks for sharing ^___^
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*throws love at you*
(best i can do) ♥
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I love your writing.
It's really touching.
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