Unspoken

Sep 18, 2012 21:46

Title: Unspoken
Fandom: B1A4
Pairing: CNU/Sandeul
Rating: G
Word Count: 1062
Summary: Sandeul shares his light.

It's really nice to meet you. )

cnu, fanfic, b1a4, rating: g, pairing: cnu/sandeul, sandeul, challenge!fic

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minsgunshot September 19 2012, 23:04:01 UTC
Aw I'm glad you liked it... sad life Sandeul was hard for me, too ;A; Thank you for reading

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judysaurus September 20 2012, 03:42:27 UTC
Wahh, this was a great fic! I loved how you described them throughout the story, I felt like their emotions were expressed well through your metaphors.

" It practically bounced off Dongwoo’s tongue as he repeated it, and saying his own name in comparison was like drinking flat soda."

I love that line in particular because it reveals so much about the two in just so little words :3

"He could be a clown or a little kid or an angel. But apparently he was only Dongwoo’s clown, Dongwoo’s kid, Dongwoo’s angel. No one else’s."

I also really loved that line because uGH IT GIVES ME FEELINGS ;______; How there's so much more to Sandeul that no one sees, except CNU ;n;

The quiet sort of way you wrote this fits well with the story, and I wish you luck with the rest of your prompts :3 Thank you for writing!

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minsgunshot September 20 2012, 04:12:32 UTC
Agh but your comments give ME FEELINGS ;A; I'm really glad you liked this, and that you thought things fit pretty nicely :3 ok I wasn't going to say anything but I'm just really happy that you pointed out specific things because they stood out to you IDK MAN WHENEVER THAT HAPPENS I JUST GET REALLY EXCITED SO THANKS LOL

OTL... and thank you so much for reading <3

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judysaurus September 20 2012, 04:41:53 UTC
haha no problem! I love quoting my fav parts of people's fic and to be honest I could quote a lot from this because I thought many parts of it were lovely :3 wheeee I hope you write more for b1a4 someday ^^

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sai12 September 20 2012, 04:59:45 UTC
Oh my god this was so sweet and sad. I wanted to bundle Sandeul up and tell the bullies a thing or two. I'm so glad Dongwoo hadn't abandoned him.

Though I loved the flat soda analogy! That immediately gave me the exact feeling you were going for.

Thanks for sharing ^___^

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minsgunshot September 20 2012, 05:09:08 UTC
CNU sees sandeul in all of his preciousness T-T teehee thanks to youu for your lovely comment, darlin'.

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blackheart_lies September 20 2012, 19:14:16 UTC
I don't know how to explain how i feel...
*throws love at you*

(best i can do) ♥

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minsgunshot September 20 2012, 23:52:30 UTC
/throws more love, makes it rain lol. Thank youuu for reading <3

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cheerguangyu March 30 2014, 04:31:01 UTC
Such a beautiful story.
I love your writing.
It's really touching.

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