{fic} in a place like this

[mintstars]

in a place like this, originally the colourless words.
Jin-centric, PG-13. hints at depression and stuff like that.
And you are so lonely that you'd (maybe) like to die.

Comments

[pumpkin_bread]

:( ....

I can relate to this too. And I can picture this happening to Jin.

[mintstars]

I guess quite a few of us can D: thank you for reading! <3

[avery_averette]

It's not easy being the lonesome kind of person that Jin is. Needs company.

[mintstars]

true D: thank you for reading! <3

[bellemainec]

this rings very true; you can see the loneliness in Jin's situation, and the awkwardness between all of them over the phone. I think Pi's message just made me go "gah" and want to cuddle Jin. Even though he made the choice to go, the roll on effect was much bigger than he thought, poor thing. And the Kame and Ueda conversations......

Really well written! Great job!

[mintstars]

ah, I'm glad that awkwardness came through! I was kind of out of it when I wrote it, so I was afraid later it wouldn't have the same effect it had in my head.

Thank you so much! <3

[tatoeba]

;______; This is so sad, but I really enjoyed it. Your writing is very pretty, and it was lovely to read. :) I liked how there wasn't an actual ending to the fic, either, leaves it a little open (even though we know he comes back) but idk how to explain it, I just liked that a lot. Poor Jin, I can imagine him going through these bouts of loneliness while in LA. :(

Anyway, thanks for writing and sharing this. I enjoyed reading it~ ♥

[mintstars]

I tend to write like that lately, so I-I'm glad you liked it. ♥ Thank you so much! :D

[citlecrewolf]

Are you going to continue this? I was hoping Jin's friends were on there way to visit and suprise him and that's why they couldn't talk :( It's sad but so nicely written, thanks :)

[mintstars]

Um, I doubt I'll write a continuation. I'm not very good at writing "happier" kinds of things just goes to show what kind of a person I am so I get the feeling that if I tried I'd fail pretty badly. Thank you, though! <3