{original} the last town

[mintstars]

the last town
"In einer Zukunft, die nicht so weit (von uns) ist."
for firefly. pg, 350 words.

Comments

[atenishinai]

...Ow.

[mintstars]

nobody ever said I was good at this D:

[atenishinai]

Ow in a....not good, but....ow way.

A few places where I feel like flow could be improved on second and third readthroughs but first readthrough...man, my heart keeps on getting shattered into these tiny little pieces D=

[mintstars]

sfklljfskd don't scare me like that, I thought that was an "ow my brain how could you write this tripe" ow (it...wasn't one, right? D:) XD;;

yeah, I definitely see what you mean - I wrote it kind of distractedly but I have edits that I'll make soon (any suggestions, btw?) askljfaklfjal ♥