Harry Potter: The Witching Hour

[minuit_etoile]

Title: The Witching Hour
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Sirius Black/Bellatrix Lestrange
Rating: PG-13/R
Warning: Incest, Darkfic
For: chimbomba at hp_wishes
Prompt: Dark. The witching hour.
Wordcount: 323
Notes: I'm not incredibly happy with it, but when I try to make it better I like it less. >.>

Comments

[chimbomba]

*SQUEEEEE!*

It's almost like you got inside my head. OMG. You wrote about them at Azkaban, which I always love to see; they hate each other's guts and then THEY KISS but it's like a punishment rather than lust. WOOO! This is so dark and creepy and wonderful. ♥ YAY! *fangirls*

[minuit_etoile]

Wow. I really wasn't completely happy with it, but I'm glad yu liked it. I was sort of going for the unsure feeling about whether he was going mad or she was there, or what, but I'm glad you like it.

Can I mention I got an evil!Tom crack bunny? Wherein some half-blood cons him into smoking Gillyweed and he falls in love with Minerva?

[chimbomba]

AHAHAHAHAHA THAT IS MY KIND OF FIC. YOU SHOULD TOTALLY WRITE THAT.

[minuit_etoile]

>.>

Have I mentioned I get very odd bunnies?

[captainpookey]

Normally this ship weirds me out.

But this was deliciously creepy and dark and over all awesome.

I really loved this line... just the imagery and the way it was structured and everything -dork-: He pressed the steel chains around her throat and growled, her hair falling over his and their gray eyes meeting, bright and hard and identical, and as his hand tightened around her throat, he kissed her hard.

ooohh.

[minuit_etoile]

I'm glad you liked it! It's definitely a ship that depends on the tone and writer I think. I'm glad you liked it!