Comments | minusoneday: Part III, April 1966: A Bloody Mess, and a Getting Off on the Wrong Foot [PG]

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Part III, April 1966: A Bloody Mess, and a Getting Off on the Wrong Foot [PG]

Mar 29, 2006 15:33

( In which Andromeda is confronted with her worst fear in a dark place. )

1966, part three

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merewiper March 29 2006, 23:14:55 UTC

♥

lookslikelove March 30 2006, 21:48:54 UTC

♥

beatific March 30 2006, 03:48:44 UTC

Heeh. Me gusto mucho!!! (: And nice foreshadowingish stuff at the end...

lookslikelove March 30 2006, 21:49:48 UTC

Hee. I'm glad that you liked it! And good to know that someone other than me appreciates the foreshadowing. ahhaa

rhapsody March 30 2006, 04:42:11 UTC

*loves*

lookslikelove March 30 2006, 21:50:39 UTC

Hee. That makes me very very happy. It's all about the hallways.

morning_star82 March 30 2006, 21:27:59 UTC

Aw, I like how this is progressing! I'm looking forward to the next update :-)

btw - I'm not being picky, I just wanted to let you know for your future writing that Ravenclaw colors are blue and bronze, not gold. I love your story, juat wanted to let you know, though.

lookslikelove March 30 2006, 21:47:11 UTC

Thanks. I'm glad you liked this. And I'm glad that people are still reading this. It makes me infinitely happy.

Hee. Thanks for letting me know about the colours. I know they're blue and bronze. XD I actually wrote blue and gold on purpose, because I know that when I was 12, I for one couldn't tell the difference between gold and bronze fabric (especially when I was upset). I really appreciate you for pointing it out though, because I know that I do make mistakes and miss things sometimes (oh boy, do I!), just this time it, this was one (go figure!).

morning_star82 March 31 2006, 00:55:47 UTC

I'm sorry! That makes perfect sense, and I didn't want to come off like I was going all canon-nazi on you or anything, I just know when I'm writing I sometimes often get so wrapped up in putting the plot togther that I forget or mix up the details :-P You know how it is. But, what you are saying makes perfect sense. Afterall, to a Black, green and silver are the only colors that matter anyway ;-)

You really are doing a great job with this XD

lookslikelove March 31 2006, 05:00:42 UTC

Oh don't worry! You didn't come off that way at all, I promise. And I know the feeling about getting wrapped up in the plot and losing the details (or getting wrapped up in the details and losing the plot). XD Yep, green and silver are the only ones.

Thank you, you really don't know how much that means to me.

tonksified March 31 2006, 10:58:18 UTC

Hey, this is brilliant. From the past few chapters, I rather thought you were going to make them friends immediately, but lo and behold, a plot twist. Kinda unexpected, but still great. Can't wait to read the next bit. Nice pictures too. :D

lucy_lapine March 31 2006, 11:55:39 UTC

Icon love!

tonksified April 1 2006, 00:51:49 UTC

Feel free to nick it if you like. XD

lookslikelove March 31 2006, 21:23:47 UTC

Hee. *blushes slightly* Thanks for thinking it's brilliant. Yep, a plot twist. They're young, all they know is stereotypes (well, Andromeda at least) so friendship from the start would a bit hard to push. But then again...they are young. Hee. Aren't they lovely pictures (the first one is Shakespeare's childhood school)?

And Lucy is right...it is a great icon that you are sporting.

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