“It seems like you’ve forgotten under this pretense of peace,” Taemin said as quietly, calmly, eyes cold and unforgiving. Key shivered; he had forgotten how jaded Taemin was indeed. “I can be a very, very cruel vampire to deal with. I was nicknamed the Prince of Winter, which brought everyone to the depths of misery and darkness, for a reason.”
I so badly want to see this version of Taemin. I bet he's brutal. guh.
He glanced up, thinking that he was missing something, when he caught sight of the manacles still chained to the wall that he hadn’t bothered taking out.
oh handcuffs. this gives me all types of excitement XD
This whole exchange between 2Min is really good! The whole wanting to trust, but knowing some shit is going down, yet drowning in desire thing is perfection. *applauds*
“Then how about this?” he purred, leaning close again, “Let me show you how good it can feel to be this disgraceful.”and this
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as much as i wanna spazz about how hot was the smut.... but then i feel like crying... oh the bad thing will happen... oh my poor heart... i love you unnie~~~ and sorry if i can't comment nextt time cause i'll be busy...sorry... but when i have the time to go online i'll go to your journal if you updated this storyt
XD Aw, and here I thought I would get people to focus more on the smut keke. Oh well, I guess that Taemin's thoughts are really dark here, huh? ;_; Poor Minnie. D:
But at least you know that I like happy endings~ And if you didn't, now you do! 8D;;;;
Luff you too dongsaeng! ^^
Oh, it's fine haha. This fic is going to be on hold for a while until I can type up the next two chapters anyway. XD;;;
lakdjfalvmc;aie. The prince of winter?!?! D: A cold Taeminnie?!?! T-T I don't want Taemin to be a cold sadistic prince foreverrrrr. He needs to be a happy human! All smiles and rainbow burps and unicorn farts and what not
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Ahaha, cold!Taeminnie was at the beginning of this entire series but Minho melted it XD Taemin's going to have a very big, drastic change in the next few chapters though. ;_;
Chainmail is COLD omg. XD And it's kind of heavy, depending on which kind you try on. >>;; but it's a good experience, so if you get the chance, try one on!
LMAO, I've seen so many manga and fanfics where the vampire sucks blood from someone's private parts. Seriously, it does look like it would hurt, even with the "pleasurable bite" part haha;;;
Ahahaha, so you enjoyed the smut?? :D I had the hardest time writing it, I swear. It was a tad bit irritating, but I'm glad I got it done. >> No more writing smut for me OTL;;
LOL, they beat /everyone's/ record in one/two days. It's amazing. ;_; So proud of my bbs. :D Also, I've been meaning to ask you if you'd like to be friends on LJ haha;;; I mean, we know each other pretty well, I think. ^^
Q.Q i didn't see this go up. I'm losing my ninja touch. ii iiisss sowwyyy
eeeeeeeeeppppp! NC-17! it was goood! i know im not going to do this post any justice whatsoever. I mite come back to edit. but HOLY L;SDKFJ;HLEWKNFSLDKFJH GAAHHHHHHHHHHH ...that keysmash was for cruel taemin. aiyy, no idea how much im anticipating that scene
...ack. getting pulled offf, love this chappy, getting back to the review in hopefully an hour, i would love a nickname, knock urself out, i need one for you too. bi!
AHA lols, i feel slightly better. this chapter came out really well, including the smut.
hmm, not necessarily cruel taemin. but not a happy cute one, or one thats trying to be sexy. i mean a bit more like his lucifer image, where he looks like he can be a very cool but collected but serious and such. like when he's walking towards the viewer, in one of his small solo lines? i can imagine him smiling, and a fang would creep out, and he could pull out a weapon, or some sort of knife. idek. its 1:30am and im not thinking straight. not even supposed to be on the computer, but i didn't like leaving a completely unfinished review post.
oh oh oh! did you read my reply to your five questions thing? it was literally three essays. READ IT READ IT READ IT! ^.^ GNITE
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I....oh fuck. give me a few minutes. my brain. it's.....guh.
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lol, Minbb, take your time~~ XD <3
(p.s. just realized I didn't spot you with my couple icon, sorry about that! I guess I was in a rush lmao;;;;;)
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I had first spot. I was like *victory dance*
ok.....now let me attempt....
“It seems like you’ve forgotten under this pretense of peace,” Taemin said as quietly, calmly, eyes cold and unforgiving. Key shivered; he had forgotten how jaded Taemin was indeed. “I can be a very, very cruel vampire to deal with. I was nicknamed the Prince of Winter, which brought everyone to the depths of misery and darkness, for a reason.”
I so badly want to see this version of Taemin. I bet he's brutal. guh.
He glanced up, thinking that he was missing something, when he caught sight of the manacles still chained to the wall that he hadn’t bothered taking out.
oh handcuffs. this gives me all types of excitement XD
This whole exchange between 2Min is really good! The whole wanting to trust, but knowing some shit is going down, yet drowning in desire thing is perfection. *applauds*
“Then how about this?” he purred, leaning close again, “Let me show you how good it can feel to be this disgraceful.”and this ( ... )
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but then i feel like crying...
oh the bad thing will happen...
oh my poor heart...
i love you unnie~~~
and sorry if i can't comment nextt time cause i'll be busy...sorry...
but when i have the time to go online i'll go to your journal if you updated this storyt
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But at least you know that I like happy endings~ And if you didn't, now you do! 8D;;;;
Luff you too dongsaeng! ^^
Oh, it's fine haha. This fic is going to be on hold for a while until I can type up the next two chapters anyway. XD;;;
Take care bb! And have fun in RL! <3
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Chainmail is COLD omg. XD And it's kind of heavy, depending on which kind you try on. >>;; but it's a good experience, so if you get the chance, try one on!
LMAO, I've seen so many manga and fanfics where the vampire sucks blood from someone's private parts. Seriously, it does look like it would hurt, even with the "pleasurable bite" part haha;;;
Ahahaha, so you enjoyed the smut?? :D I had the hardest time writing it, I swear. It was a tad bit irritating, but I'm glad I got it done. >> No more writing smut for me OTL;;
LOL, they beat /everyone's/ record in one/two days. It's amazing. ;_; So proud of my bbs. :D Also, I've been meaning to ask you if you'd like to be friends on LJ haha;;; I mean, we know each other pretty well, I think. ^^
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eeeeeeeeeppppp! NC-17! it was goood!
i know im not going to do this post any justice whatsoever. I mite come back to edit.
but HOLY L;SDKFJ;HLEWKNFSLDKFJH GAAHHHHHHHHHHH
...that keysmash was for cruel taemin. aiyy, no idea how much im anticipating that scene
...ack. getting pulled offf, love this chappy, getting back to the review in hopefully an hour, i would love a nickname, knock urself out, i need one for you too. bi!
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Was it? I'm glad it was okay, at least. I /slaved/ over this chapter hardcore lol;;; no joke.
LOL You want to see cruel Taemin? XD That's a first keke.
Hmm, nick...a nick...idek. How about...uh...Ya? XD That way I can go, "YAHHH!!" hahahaha;;; OTL idk. I'm so lost right now fft.
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this chapter came out really well, including the smut.
hmm, not necessarily cruel taemin. but not a happy cute one, or one thats trying to be sexy.
i mean a bit more like his lucifer image, where he looks like he can be a very cool but collected but serious and such.
like when he's walking towards the viewer, in one of his small solo lines? i can imagine him smiling, and a fang would creep out, and he could pull out a weapon, or some sort of knife. idek. its 1:30am and im not thinking straight. not even supposed to be on the computer, but i didn't like leaving a completely unfinished review post.
oh oh oh! did you read my reply to your five questions thing? it was literally three essays. READ IT READ IT READ IT! ^.^
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