Unworthy-Optimus and Skywarp

Jan 28, 2010 17:36

Hi!! Here is a quick short story from a prompt poll that was on my FF.net page.  The prompt was Optimus/Skywarp: Unworthy.

Warning: OOCness may abound.  Skywarp having a profound moment.  My doing this in the two hour break between classes.  That's about all.

Here be the story )

transformers, fanfic, skywarp, one-shot, optimus

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niyazi_a February 4 2010, 04:40:46 UTC
Oh very nice! I love Skywarp's manipulations of everyone here--I always suspected he's smarter than he lets on. Great job!

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eerian_sadow February 4 2010, 05:09:08 UTC
i adore non-stupid Skywarp. sure he's not the brains of the outfit, but that doesn't make him an idiot like a lot of authors make him out to be. i love your portrayal of him here.

and i especially love your Optimus. i can't find the words to say exactly what i'm feeling just now, but he was wonderful.

this is a great fic. ^_^

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wicked3659 February 4 2010, 08:22:19 UTC
Really enjoyed this, the characters are nicely written and I love how you've portrayed Skywarp with this, it's good he's not shown to be an idiot!

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mira_meerkat February 5 2010, 16:43:29 UTC
Thanks! Your reviews made a crappy sick day a whole lot brighter! And, not to gush (even though I totally am) I love the stories you three post. I'm just bad at reviewing.

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