Learning Curve Chapter the First

May 11, 2009 15:56

Summary (and needless author backstory): I started writing this for the TF2007Fun Kink Meme. Then real life decided to become a mess for awhile and the meme has been moved due to the old one reaching the limits for comments. So I decided to rewrite and repost what I've done so far and get the other chapters finished as well since real life has ( Read more... )

fireflight, transformers, fanfic, learning curve, red alert

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anonymous July 15 2009, 12:02:35 UTC
Teehee Fireflight is such a dolt at times! Punctuation is good and flows nicely and there is only one grammatical mistake I can find...

'As if some fate had heard and accepted that statement as a challenge the door opened and Red Alert call out to him.'- I am thinking it was supposed to be called. Feh, I am always doing that....

But yay! Great start and can't wait to see what happens!

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