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[miraculousdream]

I just wrote this story.  It's one I've been wanting to write for a long time.   It's a rough draft, so I'm looking for feedback and advice.  I'm considering adding more to the story, like writing the same major event from different perspectives.  Perhaps one from the pilot, and one from another person in the city.  Then I'd connect them together

Comments

[viable_chimera]

Oo! Oo! Do the pilot next!

[godzilla_magnum]

Well done well done, I'm actually impressed. That was a really unique perspective of Hiroshima, and I definitely wanted to keep reading on the more I read. Keep it up!